rate_review Reviews

Oh my. I\'m such a sucker for these kinds of stories, and as always, deathfics make me cry. *sniff* Anyway, It was ok written. I\'d prefer it if the chapter was a little longer and more detailed though. It would give it all a much better flow and make it a bit more interesting.

Oh my. Between me and you poor Duo will never be happy. I really loved the way you abused my favorite character. He screams for it. Sorry I am being weird. Anyway, your writing was too short, I wanted more, I wanted sex, lots and lots of graphic sex with Heero\'d death as the final come down. but the way you wrote it, was 10 times better than how I wanted it, as it is this is a very touching little story, and the not so happy ending, especially the way you worded it, really made me want to cry. Good Job
Nishi

Sorry, if I got a little weird there, I haven\'t been sleeping, I think it is begining to show too. And not just in the reviews, winces thinking about horrible fic I just posted.

Sorry, I forgot to mention, you used like my absoultly favorite song, and as much as I detest songfics, I LOVED it, Good Job