rate_review Reviews

I have to say that I'm impressed. I would never have imagined this couple. I'm not one for bara and Major Armstrong is definitely not my usual bag, but you pulled it off splendidly. I commend you, it was hot and intense, but I would add a little more detail to the lemon, just to ensnare your reader more. If you want a good hook for this couple and get more people into it, I'd also add another chapter about Havoc's POV. Most people that read these are women and we love knowing that the uke is getting a lot out of it. I also felt that the ending left a feeling of not knowing if Havoc was on-board about the whole affair. Maybe another chapter or a little edit to ensure that he was as hooked as Armstrong would take care of that nicely. Again, this was very well done and I really liked it. Kudos!

I feel honor-bound to review this considering how much mirth I reaped, but I just don't know what to say!! XD

I had a brief moment of horror at some of Armstrong's behavior, as it seemed-GASP-underhanded, but then I remembered that he sought to embark on a sincere and passionate romance with Jean. So, it was really for the young man's owb good. Startlingly appealing in the sex scenes; I adored how Jean just resigned himself to the ministrations of an exhaustingly attentive lover. Armstrongs have passion in spades. Honestly, the only thing truly wrong is how well you made it work. Damn you.

I am literally shaking with suppressed laughter, well done.
Nacht

This is an excellent Armstrong x Havoc story & I think you should write more of them!!!

If it weren't for the dare I would'nt have read it. That was well written but also the fact is was Armstrong, I mean dang XDDD. All things considered tho, good fic :) glad I read!

I don't know how you did it, but that was disturbing and very hot all at once.

...cuuuuuteXDD Armstrong as a lover - killer idea, but it worked here perfectly! Poor Jean, never knew what hit him, poor Roy, first time in his life doesn't know what's going onXD Great work, relly great!

O-oh my...I can't...*Giggles* It's -- *LAUGH* -- I...*SNORT*

XD I can't stop laughing. Seriously, I'm dying. I think I've woken up the whole house. XD Th-the sparklies killed me, and the...the...THREE orgasms! *Dies laughing all over again* I'd say poor Havoc, but I just can't seem to bring myself to. XD

Is it bad that I actually liked it? *GIGGLES* YOU, my friend, are an amazingly talented writer! And now I wanna read more about them together! *GIGGLESNORT* You evil, evil person...as if I'm not addicted to crack!pairings ENOUGH!

*Bows down to your greatness*

Well this is new for me.....in a strange way I really liked this.Armstrong was very amusing.

...Wow. I didn\'t think anyone could pull off a Armstrong/Havoc lemon so well. I didn\'t even think that anyone could pull off an Armstrong lemon so well. He\'s so...odd. Yes, yes, that\'s the word...odd...

Kudos to you.

Its like watching a trainwreck. You don't want to, but you just can't HELP it. -stares in horrrified facination- Sigh, damn I need to get better at spelling, either that or get a program with spell check!! -grimaces-

~Chi