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Oh god, I can\'t beleive I just read the whole thing through... uhhh *brain falls out*
But man, you fucking rock that you\'re able to write something like this. Seriously.

Yeaaaaahhhh.. I can\'t decide if I want to kiss you, or hit you with a cricket bat....

<3loveandkisses
chris

ps-yeah, i\'mma ho, so I\'mm going to ask you to write an human!AlXwrath fic. Fine, I dare you....



please......?

... ... ...

I. Hate. You.

You made me like it. You made it plausible. YOU MADE SEX WITH ARMSTRONG SEEM POSSIBLE!

DAMN YOU FOR INTRODUCING ME TO THE TABOO! DAMN YOU!

-breaks down into a mixture of giggles and uncontrollable sobs.-

But really, very good. You must have strong balls to write something like this, indeed. And you did it so well...my imaginary hat is off to you. And that hat is red, with a black feather...

But still, you haven\'t made the weirdest pairing I\'ve heard of so far.



Try to top a Gluttony/Havok. I QUADRUPLE DOG DARE YOU!

With much respect and maniac laughing (three orgasms!)
Queen Creepy

I must tell you, I am very impressed.

Holy fuck. That was awesome.

When I first saw this... :O... Then, ^^-ness. Yes. Hysterical AND... YAOI bundled into one beautiful masterpiece. I think I cried.

(I actually think I read a Thousand Nights of Sodomy... huh... no, it was 120 days of Sodomy... Oh well, only 880 days diffrence.)

Please... write more... for the sake of our yaoi deprived selves.

Hooooooooooooo!!!! It can\'t get any better! I so love the odd pairing but I have to say it one takes the cake! So very hot anf, dare I say, honorable. I would definitely wanna see more of this.

This was so enjoyable. XD Once again, I do enjoy your style. Armstrong\'s speech patterns were accurate and likable. You actually inspired sympathy for a character I couldn\'t get close to before. And you managed to make the pairing sexy, which I hadn\'t expected. Good show.

oh my god, i have never laughed so hard. when you wrote that armstrong\'s sparkles took off his undershirt, i cracked up. his sparkles are a body limb- hahaha!! also, when you wrote about the \'ancient armstrong tradition of seduction- a lot of alcohol\', i was almost crying. this was great. absolutely great. when i watch fullmetal next, i will not be able to not see this.

Hahaha!! Let\'s see if I can stop laughing long enough to leave a review, lol. That was hilarious!! You manage to take a totally weird pairing and make it work! *bows down* I haven\'t seen the English FMA yet, but this is almost exactly how I imagine Armstrong would speak. You captured Mustang very well too. The only picky details that slightly bugged me was the \"modified technique 14\" thing (I dont\' think he goes *that* far; but in retrospect, the comedic value makes up for it) and the fact that Armstrong would even *consider* the Elric brothers as possible lovers (don\'t think the family honor would allow *that* kind of sodomy). Overall, I have to say that this is one of the most amusing fics I have ever read. Great Job. Now excuse me while I go browse through your other fics.

Saph

ROTFLMFAO.

XD Sparklies! Many many sparklies upon you!