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I still love the story, but...so sad...Tyson make Talas world shine^_^ Ohhh, Tyson shiney.... sombody have a cookie?? I have eaten a large amount of comfort chockolate(explains the shugar rush...) And I\'m gonna eat more since this chappie was soo damn sad, but still so fruggin unbelieveable good, impossible to stop reading! *Glomps u* If I havent said so, Thank you so much for creating this amazing story^_^

I love this, it\'s such a good fic and the writing is awesome, no spelling errors (that I can see) which is always a huge bonus. Keep it up, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Whoa....... I didn\'t expect anything like that, but... that is BETTER than I\'ve imagined!!! :) It\'s really cool, continue the same way! Are Lee and Kevin in the next chapter? I would like to see them!

Yay. BryRay in next one. Looking forward to it. Tried racking my brains for the person in Tala\'s dream, but can\'t think of anyone except Kai, who\'s very much alive, Wyatt, Goki and
Ozuma from the clues in the dream. Who was it? Looking forward to the next part.

This is great!!! Please, update SOON!!!!! I want to know what\'s happening!!! I know, I\'m impatient... but... jeah. I just can\'t wait the next chapter!!! >_<

Hi!

wow - wonderful work! I love your characterizations - you really give them all distinct personalities, so they seem very real. That\'s a nice treat :D You\'re also doing a fabulous job balancing the angsty aspects of life with the funnier moments - it flows together very naturally, which makes the story that much nicer to read :D It looks like this\'ll be a great story - plz keep it up! You\'re doing a wonderful job!

Totally random thought: LOL I almost died laughing with the \"\'english lesson\' argument\" (as Ty puts it) - I know ppl like that - its very funny to watch, and even more fun to do! (it\'s also a great way to get really weird looks from innocent bystanders lol ;P)

\'Till next chapter!
-K.M.

Hey hey hey friend. Glad to see you\'ve updated. I love that you\'re gonna put Ray/Bryan in it. I love that pairing. Hope Mariah doesn\'t get too cosy. God is she ever a pain. If you still need a beta, I\'d be happy to help. Just write to the above address, or write in he next chapter. That link sounds really cool. I love fanart. Looking forward to the next chapter.

LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON!!! PLZ ^_^ YAY!! TALA/TYSON YAY!!!

This is a really good story! Well written, beautifully composed. Please write more soon!

this was a good chapter sad but well written i love how you make each sentance so powerful keep up the damn good work and update soon