rate_review Reviews

This is just a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing their special moment with us!

Wow- what a lemon. Best Winry X Ed lemon I\'ve ever read. I love how you pulled off the condom use; it wasn\'t degrading or un-romantic in any way, shape or form. Cheers * Nice way to promote condom use* ^.^ Nuff said about that. I loved the WAFF stuff, it was a great change of pace and a real breath of fresh air. I hope you write some more WinXEd fics.

Ha ha ha! Brilliant! The only thing I have to say is, why can\'t I be Winry?!?! *laughs* Shall you make one of Roy and Riza??? That would be marvelous and...well. Great!

more!?!?!?! is your name \'Angel of Smut\'????? I think so! hot hot hot heat!! loved the scene- sexy, realistic and do you know, you\'re the first author that actually says how damn hard it is not to move once a guy is in. I imagine it takes a lot out of a fellow. good for ed! i\'ll be on the lookout for your stuff!

Ah! VERY nice! This was well worth the wait. Very sexy and yet still very sweet. Hehehehe. I liked it muchlies and you did well with the use of protection. It worked here nicely. I certainly can\'t wait to read more fics from you, so keep up the writing!! I\'ll be waiting! ;)

Aw maaaaaannnn! What\'s the deal with the condoms! I still think that since this is a fanFICTION that you didn\'t have to put that in....It was still a great chapter, though^_^

Yes! A rarely found (but greatly treasured) m/f fic, and well written on top of it! I almost wept =) Anyways, I like the way you are tying these chapters together. Even though they deal predominately with the \"lovin\'\" aspect of the relationship the story as a whole does not come across shallow. I am also THRILLED to read that not only are you continuing with this fic, you already have ideas in the works for others! I will definately be checking in for those additions. Thanks for the read.

Heh, sorry to double post. I just forgot to mention your question on protection. I agree with everyone else that protection is an important element to any story that relates sexual acts. But to be perfectly honest I\'m not sure if the topic can be appropriately added to the FMA world without it being awkward. If you feel you can address it comfortably in your story than PLEASE be sure and do so. If not the call is up to you. Since the setting for FMA, though not historical, is definately not a modern-day one you can probably get away with either one.

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This is really good so far ur doing a fantastic job!!!^_^ ummm could u email me when u have the next chapter in??