rate_review Reviews

What a great story! I love Ed/Winry pairings and this fanfic edge to it that nice to read. As far as protection is concerned I really don\'t think it\'s necessary in a fanfic. I do agree that protection is very important but fanfics are pure fantasy so writing in a contraceptive may distrub the flow of the story. I guess it all depends on how gracefully it\'s written in. Either way you\'re doing a great job and I look forward to may more chappies!!!

Beautiful chapter! I like how you write the sensitive nature between the characters. As for your question on birth control. It really depends on how it\'s written. If it\'s written in a delicate manner, its not a turn off. Or- we can just assume Winry is on the pill lol.

YAY! Thanks for updating! Another awesome chapter. Hehehe... naughty Winry. And Ed, too. Anywho, about your question... good one. Protection is important in real life, but in a fiction setting, its really up to the writer. The question really is: What do you think Ed and Winry would do? Would they have a \'spurr of moment\' type sex in which no protection is involved or would it be more... planned, I guess is the word for it. Either way is fine to me as long as it keeps the two of them IC and is believeable. ;) Write more soon! :)

::begins to cry:: I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
i need some more edxwin smut and this was a glorious example of edward and winry smuttiness!! smut in its prime i would say!!!BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was sexy and delicious and such a tease. PLEASE continue!! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please...more!! More!

That was definitely a thrilling chapter. Nice job, this is so going on my recommendation list!

WOOOOT! Finally, more EdxWinry smut. I desire it so. I look forward to more of this!! Update soon!