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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start for your story. It will be interesting to see where you take it. I\'m glad to see that the magna version of the characters will be used. It\'s a refreshing twist. 8-) One thing though, in the magna, Al did not strike me as shy and retiring as in the anime. Will his character here be more along the lines of the magna or anime. Either is great, since Al is a well fleshed out, believeable character in both. I\'m just curious....
Keep up the good work! 8-) I\'ll be waiting eagerly for the next installment.
Keep up the good work! 8-) I\'ll be waiting eagerly for the next installment.