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That was beautiful! is there more? (hopeful kitten!)
You had me crying there, nyan! The images were really powerful and complete. It was painful to behold. I was angry Roy didnt do anything and was about to hope he got ran over by a reindeer or something... but then Al came to the rescue and it was fine. It was so warm and loving! I dont do much al x ed but you really made me believe it and actually look forward to it. Well written, great syntax and grammar... it was a pleasure to read even as my heart went out to them... but that was the idea, ne? At first I was confused, on the first chapter with the explosion and the cave in... but I guess that was intentional... the rest of the story is too well planned for it not to be so. Anyway... let me shut up now, I just wanted to tell you I started to read at 12am and its 353am and im not going to bed until I finish your review, which by the way you earned all the way! Thank you! It was a pleasure to read!

Oh my god! I love this series! Actually, I love all of your Ed/Al stories. They're so cute. It was sad but it had a good ending! *Glomp* Keep writing! ^_^

Best. FMAfic. Ever.

WHAT REST???? WHAT REST COULD WAIT???? WHO WAS THE SNEAK??? the leak to central???? WHAT IS THE REST?!?!?!?!?!?
much love and utterly frustrated
Eddie

My GOD that was a powerful story. Your descriptions were insanely vivid. Chapter 9 was increasingly unbearable to read. I was mildly disturbed to read about the hand, but the torture with the glass was so incredibly unfathomably horrible... it actually hurt to read it. You conveyed the emotions brilliantly, the hope and fluff contrasted well with the fear and pain and made both sides stand out in comparison. Also, Ch. 13 was a good place to end, in my opinion, but the Epilogue was a funny little something that I think made it better. Nice work.

Absolutely exquisite....... *sighs blissfully* I had forgotten just how much I love your writing style. ^^ I\'m so glad that you decided to add \"another\" epilogue, lol. I wondered about a few things myself, but the \"first\" ending was so good that I chose to \"overlook\" them. But you did a wonderful job of fixing the (essentially non-existant) problem(s), so again, congrats! ^___~ Oh, and I can\'t wait for the end of your \"Angsty Elrics\" series, by the way......... Keep up the good work!!!

just finished...damn good stuff.keep writing!

aw...christ,that\'s painful!even worse than anything that happened to ed in the series.but damn, can you write!very nice work,even if it\'s highly disturbing.heh.like i can talk, my fic treats ed the same way...^_^

Very nice, I like things that are different!
I had to stop at the end of chapter six, but I\'m going to finish it when I get back.
Heh, don\'t worry; I love being mean to Ed too. 0_^
I truly do love what you\'ve done with Al, all your characters seem to be very in character.
A few times I got lost in the plot, feeling like it was an episode.
Amazing work; you deserve an award, or a bottle of sake!

Oh my god!!! *hugs* What a perfect ending!!! It was just ADORABLE!!! *hugs again and gives chocolates* ^^ I loved this fic soooooo much -- again, as I mentioned in an earlier review, the descriptions and characterizations were excellent, and it was overall just a very...enjoyable experience, lol. ^___~ You have definite talent -- keep up the good work!!!