rate_review Reviews

The way you are able to capture and communicate emotions is amazing. The feeling of Al towards Ed as a mix of a younger brother idolizing an older brother, admiration for Ed and brotherly (and not so brotherly) love was great. The way the roles are now reversed, with Al providing support and comfort for Ed is very well done.

The plot development, what happen to Ed and who was involved, I\'m expecting to be just as good. You\'ve done such a good job at the rest. 8-)

I am a bit puzzled about Ed\'s reaction to the correspondance between Mustang and his kidnappers though. Is it the realization of the passage of time since his capture and rescue? That the kidnappers had been in contact with the goverment yet nothing was done (no ransom paid)?

Great chapter! 8-)

Oh! A triumph! I am truely spellbound, unable to keep myself from checking this story for more more more more more!!! :D

This was a good chapter --> you did a great job in describing the change in the brother\'s relationship once Al got his body back. Nice description of the developing feelings of Ed for Al (and for how jealous he was when Winry came for a friendly visit).

Now to see where the plot goes... 8-)

yeeeeeeeeyyyyyyy, an update so quickly. Keep up the good work. Cant wait for the next chapter

Oh. My. GAWD, you are one eeeeviiiiiiil, maniacle, sadistic person, you know that? Which makes me wonder just what that makes me, seeing as how I enjoy this story so much...... ^___~ The characterizations is this still never cease to amaze me, and the plot!bOMG, it\'s just SPECTACULAR, and I am DYING with anticipation to know what happens!!! ^^ It\'s just so sad that Ed acted like his usual hot-headed self and left right before Al confessed to him.......and all because he misunderstood, too!!! *sniffles and cuddles with her Edward plushie* Honestly, if he wasn\'t so \"beat up\", etc, I would soooooo TOTALLY be pissed at him right now!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and PLEEEEASE~ update ASAP!!!

beautiful as usual, and i really love the fact that you update frequently. Keep up the good work and torture.

I\'m glad you are taking your time in fleshing out the characters and situation Ed and Al are currently in. The temption must be great to rush ahead, but this development of the brothers and how their relationship is changing in regards to Ed\'s changed body will yield great dividends later in the story.

I love the way you are showing the strength, tenderness and compassion in Al. 8-)

I have to say I am totally captivated. I love a good angsty story and if you were a musician I would call you a superior lyricist. You use of wording and description truly turns this writing from a fan-fic to a story. I eagerly await further chapters. So far everything is wonderful.

Man i love this. Keep the updates a-com\'n cant wait for the next one. Eddi-poo will get back to normal wont he??? Well anyhoo, keep up the good work.

HOLY SHIT! WHAT DID THEY DO TO ED?! *RAAH!* I\'LL KILL THEM!

good story though...very nicely written. poor ed...*sniffle*