rate_review Reviews

A great chappie. You do have the gift for being able to capture emotions and communicating them in such a way that it is easy to feel with the characters! 8-)

The tears shared when watching Ed\'s first sunset in years was beautifully done. Also, Ed\'s final burst of pride and ultimate reaction to Al\'s gentle bathing and shampooing (man it feels great to have someone shampoo my hair...) I enjoyed too. That last \"I can do it\" before going back to sleep was priceless. 8-)

I like it keep up the updates I like the soft hearted moment in chapter 5

aaaaah i want more, gimme more. Please!!!!!

Oh....My God........... That was simply...amazing. Seriously, I absolutely loved it, and that means a lot coming from me -- I\'m not that fond of fics that include torture. ^^ The descriptions were quite well done, but the characterizations! Damn!!! The characterizations were some of the best I\'ve ever come across!!! ^___^ This is a very original idea, and you\'ve pulled it off quite nicely -- it\'s very realistic, and I can\'t wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

Love it update soon please and thank you!!!

You\'re doing a great job! 8-)

The effort and detail being put in describing the brother\'s feelings and action is well done. It is easy to feel their tears of pent up fears and relief at finally being together again. I could see Ed cringing in the dark in fear of what Al\'s reaction to him would be. Al\'s horror and gentle feeling of Ed\'s wing to come to terms with what had probably happened to Ed was well described.

I especially like the end of chapter 4 where Al gives voice to the idea that it is time to get out of the darkness. It hit me on a couple of levels. Yes, there is the literal \"let\'s get out of the cave\". Then there is Ed\'s comming out of the darkness of fear into the light of day. To his friends and other\'s.

Good job! I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapter. 8-)

um yeah, so whens the next chapter coming out now? I love this, please you have got to hurry and update.

Pretty darn good story so far!

This is wonderful...I love it so much...you\'re a wonderful writer with great talent. The opening chapter was concise and engaging, I was hooked from the every beginning.

I look forward to reading the rest, and I can\'t wait.

Great job.

Madame

Woooooooo! Nice to see this fic here too, where we can get all the NC-17 details!!! Now to check if this has been updated on fanfiction.net.... mwahahaha....