rate_review Reviews

I love this story i Can't wait to see if you will update =D

You must update this!!!!! I think it's nummly written. You have a talent for story telling, and I need more!

write more! your required to write more! that was great, i loved it. *rates 5*

I just wanted to say I love your sotry. It was brilliant, magical, and truly captivating. You truly captured the depth and personality of Greed w/out OOCs. I love how you portrayed Kimbley. He's my favorite character and I like how it was romantic rather than plain rough -n-tussle sex. I also love the vivid descriptions of the sex. Most authors that write yaoi tend to blur or blot over sexual details or are afraid to say sexual words. I also love how you included lube. Yeah, I know that sounds weird but I wonder when guys have anal without any lube, OUCH! spit doesn't even cut it. Also, you included it smoothly so there wasn't any interruptions. I really love this story and I bookmarked.

I hope you contact me because I do appreciate your work.
Love, XOXOXOXOXOXOX!

XD wooooo! I love this! Such detail and the wording is awesome! Plus, I love this couple. O.O I am currently almost obsessed with it. n.n Good job, can't wait to read more!

I absolutely love this. Even though different speakers always make up new paragraphs, I really liked this. Keep it up and if you need one, I could beta for you ^^ Good job.