rate_review Reviews

Yeah, hi. I'm an author on this site, I'm just not logged in at the moment, and I noticed that I saved your story to my favorites, but never got around to reading it. So I read it, and couldn't really find fault in it. ^^ Nice work. I've stopped writing FMA for a while, but there's at least one smut fic I wrote with Ed and Winry. ::shrugs:: Anyway, ja ne! :) (:

Oh, wait, I... have read it? o.O Sorry then, I really couldn't remember reading it. << God my memory's getting bad. ><

I really like this story. I've read it about 5 times. Winry is a good friend and I'm glad she got through to him.

Wow.... that was really very moving. I really liked it, truly. Poor Ed... ::sad::.

Man, that was probably one of the best stories I have ever read, I loved the way you wrote it, that was just absolutly amazing, I was blown away. I don't submit to AFF, but I do write fanfictions and I can only hope to get to the level you are. Thank you for writing such an awsome story.
-Yosuke

oh god i loved the way he was so foceful.

please make more.god i wish i could do winry!

Oh...wow. That was powerful. You handled the characters really well, their motives and reactions were very belieavable. Great work, and I\'m happy it ended on a positive note. :)

I agree, it\'s hard to consider this a rape fic, because there was no actual rape happening. It was just role-play. Convincing role-play, but RP nonetheless. I think it was very sweet, what Winry did for Ed. I\'m not sure many people would do that. *shrugs*

I\'m going to write some smut, eventually... I\'ve tried my hand at it before, and I MAJORLY sucked. So I\'m a little scared to try it again. lol

Oh, and as a side-note for your little \"challenge\"... I read somewhere-- Cosmo, I think-- that it\'s been done in a Victoria\'s Secret dressing room. I\'m 100% sure FMA doesn\'t have a Vic.\'s, but anyway. It can be any lengerie store.

This was a damn good story. I was impressed with how you handled the psycological aspect of the story. Ed\'s need to re-capture a sense of control, winry\'s accomodation of this, and ed\'s subsequent mending all seemed rather believable to me. Kudo\'s in handling a tough subject so well:)

P.S.
I have a little something for your challenge about the craziest, most public, or most taboo place someone has had sex. A homeless person\'s shopping cart.

Very good, I\'m impressed with your style and how you are able to take a sensitive topic and give it a positive message. I\'m referring to your way of revenge in Edward towards Envy upon locating him. Very good. :)