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heres some places ... on the roof ... in the library or any other store after closing ... or in a public rest room ... oh yea and in the bath room of youre house while you whole familys in the house

I usually read yaoi, but I really enjoyed this! Keep it up!

Well done & realistic.

I truly do love your way of conducting Ed/Win. =) This is wonderful, and while I would add in my own... well, I get distracted whenever I write smut, LoL. I bring you the gift of strange sex though:

There\'s a powerbox behind my house, lined right up with my fence and sort of placed in an alcove, there. How many teenagers have sat upon that box, hidden by a very large tree, and tossed off their virginity? I COULD NOT BEGIN to recount the many times during the summer I heard the young cries of ecstasy... \"Ow,\" \"Oh my god, what IS that?\" \"Where the hell are you trying to put your fingers!?\" \"I\'m gonna fall!\" etc. Sadly, they will no longer be covered as of next week - new fence.

Hasta - this is a very... Actually, I just wrote a nice little thing about Hastas here, and I\'ve decided that I might, very well, try it out, myself. The writing, that is, not the Hasta-sex. Scratch Hastas!

Damnit. I\'ve seen some *funny* things, and some *strange* locations, but I can\'t recall them, now that they\'re being requested! =( Oh, well. I\'m sure you\'ll get some crazy responses.

=*<~ To you.

Yay! Finally finished! What a nice ending to a very nice story. Thanks so much for writing this wonderful read! You\'re right, this place needs A LOT more EdxWinry smut. And it would also help if they were all as good as this one! ;) Sorry, I couldn\'t think of any wild places to have sex that are at least semi-realistic. I\'m thinking a train, but I think that\'s been done before. Well, whatever you come out with next I\'ll be sure to read it! Can\'t wait and thanks again for this sad, and yet sweet, story! :)

It was very well-written. You wrote this expertly... it had me thinking you had either experience with this situation or a degree in psychology... but you answered all my questions in your AN @ the end. AGAIN, very well done.

A very nice story. I like how that even though Ed was \'fake\' raping Winry, she still did it to comfort him, which is usually something the man does for the woman so I like how it was flipped.
I love both of your stories^^

I liked this a lot, personally. I find that Edward\'s way of coping with the rape seemed quite realistic, alongside Winry\'s willingness to help him.

Great job.

This fic is wonderful. It\'s odd but very interesting to see how the recreation of the act was slowly healing Ed. Winry\'s character was so on point and canon: there to help, knowing her boundry and Ed\'s but pushing past them anyways. great job.

oh my god, you are freakin\' telepathic!!! i am in middle of writing something like this!!!! weird!!!!!!!!!!!! this was well done. DAMN well done!!! i am so impressed, i cannot even tell you! psychological and gripping, it was short but so potent! god, it KICKED ASS!! to make such an impact with so little takes a lot of talent- you are a great writer from this piece alone!