rate_review Reviews

it was good, though extremely short. i wouldnt be too worried about it being rape, ed is just frustrated and needed some comforting. he wants someone to need him and assuming winry cares for him a lot (which she does...) he had sex with her! not a problem there!

Once again. yuo\'re fics touch on the reality of humanity. This is one of the best rape fics I have read where the act and healing process is seemingly real. Most rape fics don\'t convey that recovering from an attack, whether male or female, takes time. Although it was only two chapters long, your fic manages to show the passage of time it takes for Ed to heal. Or at least begin the road to recovery.

I think you did a great job with this fanfic. I think that you properly expressed all of the emotions and frustrations that would come with kind of invasive, unwanted act. Bravo on giving this story a very real and personal feel.

Wow...........Though I figured that Ed & Win could basically take from 1 another agreesively, deeply.,,,I can finally see Edward as the firm, lonely, needy agressor.....Hmmmmm.........i must say U indeed made me think of the their sexual communication in less playful but more serious fashion. thanx 4 a new way 2 replay their love-making in my filthy lil mind!

You will try to close this one wont you? I mean as I read it I wondered if maybe there was something deeper Ed needed from Winry. Something he wasn\'t will to ask for. Details girl..please...

(coughs)

I was wondering (since I love you smut effect on Ed and Winry) if you have ever tried a challenge? I host a site that post challenges weekly for full metal alchemist. My thoughts however usually run amoug the smut type however I never get a smuty response...

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Honestly i liked it, i mean sure it was rape but it wasnt really forcefull or unpleasant. Winry under stoond n all, anywyas really likes it juts wnated to priase. i dont normally review, feel special! hah ^.^

This was really good. I took psycology in school so I totally understand it. You did a wonderful job on it. Keep up the good work. ^_^