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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one. You really don\'t see many GohanxVegeta fics anymore. You did really well and I hope you write more.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like VegetaxGohan so this one was good for me. I think you did great, but ti seemed a little rushed for me. Oh well, it was good. But why was Trunks alive when Goten was dead? How did Goten die?
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See, I knew you could do it, and it turned out great^_^
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, now damn, I hate hnging damn it You can do it just trust your instincts hehe
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start, now would you please finish? I hate the suspense lol
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I hate cliff hangers, But it is great, so. make it even better by doing more on it please.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...despite the fact that Gohan/Vegeta really isn\'t my thing, so far, I think you\'ve done well. Sadly, I don\'t think I\'ll read more than this chapter, because I am a Goku/Vegeta person myself.
However, your writing style is good.
Do continue
However, your writing style is good.
Do continue