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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one needs an mpreg warning.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny, I lost count at the many times I laughed out load.
Goku is adorable, so much like the anime, he acts so clueless yet with a purpose. Loved him being a guard dog, so possessive and determined, and reasoning in his mind that he was the best match for Vegeta, although Yuri could try, he would stop at nothing get his prince.
Poor Vegeta, just give in to Goku, you know you want to :-) His mutterings after Goku left through the window had me in stitches.
So glad you are continuing this.
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Goku is adorable, so much like the anime, he acts so clueless yet with a purpose. Loved him being a guard dog, so possessive and determined, and reasoning in his mind that he was the best match for Vegeta, although Yuri could try, he would stop at nothing get his prince.
Poor Vegeta, just give in to Goku, you know you want to :-) His mutterings after Goku left through the window had me in stitches.
So glad you are continuing this.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so glad you updated this story. I remember reading it ages ago on here and was saddened to see it hadn't been updated in awhile.
I hope you are quicker to update this time, Great story, Can't wait to read more.
I hope you are quicker to update this time, Great story, Can't wait to read more.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of an uke Vegeta or a seme Goku, but I still had to compliment you on your Vegeta. I LOVE you characterization of him and his wit. I laughed on several different occassions when he spewed his insults and made snarky comments.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story. Very innovative. I like the dialogues between kaka and veggie. you really kept their character. I cannot wait to read more. Please update soon!!!!
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. Really. This is great. I'd say more, but I'm laughing too hard to type all that well. Looking forward to more.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful! I absolutely adore how possessive you made Goku is in this.
Completely humorous and sweet. Vegeta is of course portrayed beautifully. Profound cursing just adds to him in spectacular ways. I’m sure I don’t need to remind you not to let Vegeta give in any time soon?
I look forward to more, and possibly when Vegeta does accept Goku as a mate. ^__^
Completely humorous and sweet. Vegeta is of course portrayed beautifully. Profound cursing just adds to him in spectacular ways. I’m sure I don’t need to remind you not to let Vegeta give in any time soon?
I look forward to more, and possibly when Vegeta does accept Goku as a mate. ^__^
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bejita is acctually spelt Vegeta, and, I can\'t remember how you spelt it, Goku\'s sayian name is spelt Kakarott. Oh, and \"Burma\" is acctually Bulma. Your story was really awesome. It was just hard at first to tell that Bejita was Vegeta. Please keep up the good work!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD this story is getting hilarious. Oh you got to write more chapters please, hahaha!