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The name your writing under reminds me of HIM...hee hee and looking at your profile I see why but anyway I love your story!! You\'re a great writer and it\'s so funny I couldn\'t stop laughing! I was so disappointed when chapter 3 ended! Please update soon I\'m addicted! I love this!!

hehe, this is still so much fun. Although I do feel sorry for Vegeta and all the unwanted attention he is getting, I more than Love an aggressive angry Goku.

*GRINS* Update soon please.

This strory is too funny... I love the SSJ4 [drools] Goku who walks in and scares the *ahem* bodily functions out of this pest!!!

Keep up the good work...this is hilarious!

*rofl* YAY GOKU!

This story is so awesome! Glad to see you\'ve updated!

WOO HOO! GO GOKU! KICK HIS ASS!! *dances happily*

It\'s wonderful. It\'s funny and smart and gives an unbelievable amount of enjoyment! Goku is being a parody of himself and Vegeta…well, Vegeta is just being himself, only that he learned to play a guitar. Bulma is the same kocky and primpy woman we know. And all that parody of the whole mating ordeal... Just priceless!

I almost pissed my pants reading the scene where Goku was staying at Vegeta’s door to play a role of a guard-dog. And the scene where Goku was trying to scare Yuri was so funny! I just loved Goku’s thinking process while he was trying to maintain his bad-guy image and was so proud of himself! You manage to make the comical and improbable things you write about so real and so detailed, that they just obsess me and make me believe they are true!

Again – wonderful chapters! Eagerly waiting for more!

lol what a funny and interesting story..plz continue lol

Hahha! Very funny! Well, I suggest askign Charon to write a battle scene. She does this pairing alot, and I\'ve seen her fics. She\'s an author here at AFF.net, so tell her that you need help. Or, you could reply to me, since I\'ve left my email, and I\'ll email her for you. Also, I think that it would be intersting if you added a short bit of lemonness in here. Just so that the readers have soemthing to chew on until the main event.

YAY!! Another chappi!! I love ya! Please update! Now! On the double! I demand it!

OH, I SO enjoy this FIC!!!! :D It keeps me smiling, and you know what, I certainly wouldn\'t be too concerned with a lemon this close the the beginning. *shakes head* I think I could read about this bizzar triangle for days, with you writing it of course, and not get bored. I adore this fic.

Keep the humor and randomness (I certainly wasn\'t expecting Vegeta to become a musician) coming!