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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really good, the plot was great and so was the portrayal of Ed and Envy. I also thought it was very well written apart from a few spelling mistakes, otherwise it was a brilliant one-shot!
I can totally see this happening, I really liked it, good job!
I can totally see this happening, I really liked it, good job!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i..uhh...i\'m not saying i\'m a fan of this kind of writing, but you did a good job writing it. there were a few mistakes, but that\'s ok. Keep writing!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue this fic!!! ^0^