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Hi :) just read the whole thing!
great work!
have you considered making a sequel? Describing Gokus pregnancy like with Vegetas? :) I can imagine that would be a lot different and I wonder how well he could manage being an alpha male while pregnant and how Vegeta would take care of him like Goku did :P
Anyway, I really liked your version :) it's not too depressing like a lot of others versions are, and I like how you focus on their sayain-animal like senses and behaviour.
I hope you are not 100% done with this story ;) although I see that is an old fanfic now

Ohhh at first, when u mentioned Andrew I was like, I bet its android 16. Then I read on and saw the "silky black hair and slanted blue eyes" and it was a dead give away. But is he going to start trouble....? I think you've given him a new lease on life, like his "sister".

Love the story! I haven't read the ones before so I'm sooooooo lost on some aspects. This story is just holding me over until you update Barracks again :)

Oh this trilogy was amazing! I've loves every minute of it and still wish it wasn't over. So much love, anger, drama, and family moments that I feel almost lost without it... I do hope you make a fourth story for this but its ok if you don't, it ended with happiness. <3

Awesome story! This is the second time I've read it. :D anyway, I just read chapter 11, and it was really good, except one little problem, I like Jeice! Why not make it Burter or Recoome or Ginyu or Guldo? Why Jeice? *pouts*
But really, great story. :)

eow that was just amazingness, it was incredibly well wrtten

OMG! This was easily the best thing I have read in a long while! I laughed, I cried and overall enjoyed myself immensely! I LOVED the Vegeta and Goku dynamic! They were so in character and yet not at the same time it was very interesting to read! And I totally love Ahrae! At first I wasn't too sure about her, but I think you did an amazing job evolving her character! I have to tell you I actually stayed up all night reading right from "to Hell Together" all the way through "Come Together" till the ending here! I know I already said I loved this but I do!

I think I might read "Lucid" next!

whaa! ^-^ that was great!!!! - great again!! :)
sooooo,
i just can say, that i love your writing style with this extra note of humor but you also always take care
of the dramatically and even almost painful and really sad parts of it.
it´s just the right mixture, in this fic, for my feeling.
and your ideas to devolop a character into a breathing, feeling, loving, hating and the like,
alive picture, is just amazing! (vegetas panick attacks, the reactions of kuririn and so on...)
the end was also great, because vegeta was in the whole story so insecure of himself and he have had those deep , painful fears and of course the panick attacks... it would have been weird, if he changed completely in the end and after giving birth to his and kakarotts baby.
because i think, when it took him so much time, to accept the love and the relation to goku, than...
well i think with his own flesh and blood it´s even worse...
and everybody knows, that he never was this kind of "fairy-tale daddy".
i understand it, as a try from vegeta, to make his child, become a tough,
strong, and fearless, guy.
think, the cutie will train with his daddy´s in the future, will he? ^^
well, trunks also trained with geta, so i think the baby will either, sometimes. *smirks*
( god. poor baby ) *giggle*
yap, and goku is there for all the kissing and hugging. and of course to prevent worse,
while vegeta and his son are trying to kill each others. Oo* yay!
^.~
at last : i loved this fic from top to toe! please, keep on writing!!! :))

aw man..so sad that it's over

it took me a while to ffigure out who the three little ones belonged to for a moment

lmaao
wow i'm stupid




but i suppose thats the end


that story is the shit and i love it to death


so um..next story?





lmaao


i know it'll be as good as the last three yew put out.

yer wicked awesome


peace out


<3

aaww gohan had another kid i just love it and it seems vegeta got goku pregnant but thats what goku wanted.

very nice