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by chayron

person Kugatsu
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee! ^w^ So cute and funny! I like all your stories....

I want to know what\'s going to happen with them...can\'t we have GOku learn Saiyan or the Saiyans learn english or are you opposed to making up more dialogue?

Woot!
person Webtester01
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Tension. I hope Vegeta teaches Goku some of the saiyan language.
person Kugatsu
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_<

um....good chapter but...*whispers* brown sperm?!

eeeeeeeeeeee!

*chuckles* Okay, I\'ll be back!
person kit-kit
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i hope vegeta had found what he was looking for.
person Webtester01
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fun chapter. It was a great read.

And, looking at your age chart again, I agree.
person bob
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the end it was funny when vegeta called goku an idiot and when goku responded. hee hee it\'s also funny because i was listening to my playlist and a song called bang bang bang came on near the end fo the chapter when the lemon came up. i\'m absolutely addicted to your story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person ~anz~
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well...

Our Goku has a propensitity for personalizing inanimate objects...hmm.

Bulma is right to yell at them about leaving her out of the loop.

This rabies thing is fun! Keep it up.

Relationships are hard...the day to day...

Thank you for taking up the challenge and sharing it with us.

~can\'t wait to see what happens next!~
person kit-kit
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i cna\'t wati for the next one.
person bob
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story and possessive goku!! but i\'m always so dissappointed when the chapter ends!!
person Kugatsu
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I hate it when Vegeta rolls over like that....let Bulma give them a house, geez Goku...

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