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by chayron

person blackcat16
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far but is there a prequel? Or you just started as it is. Are you going to have flashback to certain parts if there\'s no prequel?
person Webtester01
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Interesting chapter. And Goten and Trunks are together?
person Shakti
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I applaude your story *tips hat and bows*! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! You never mentioned how old Goten and Trunks are, but if they are in their mid to late teens, try putting the two of them together! ;D
person bob
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was a little lighter than the lkast but once again i luv this story!
person kit-kit
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Webtester01
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cool.

It was funny watching everyone\'s reaction to the news of their mating.
person Kugatsu
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^w^

This was nice! Lurve and luv are bastardizations of \"love\"....^w^ Don\'t worry over it.

I do love this story though!
person anz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant Saiyans...intriguing!
person bob
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm.....goku threatened to kill vegeta... that\'s not good!!! but i still luv it and i can\'t wait for the next chapter, and yea it wasn\'t funny but i\'ll go on i still luv it.
person Kugatsu
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was awesome! What\'s with the othr two saiyans though...are they in lurve? *tee hee*

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