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person Irol
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw its over...but i liked the ending it was sweet in a wierd way you know? i loved it.
person bob
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, pendito that was so sad. I hope Vegeta's OK!!!!
person kailover2006
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope vegeta is ok anyway please keep updating this story i just love all your stories
person Saiyajinprincess
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE your stories, as you know and i keep on, looking forward the next chapter, either, whenever your beta is ready and you update it. ^^

it´s impressive, that you write so much with such a high quality and as an not english native speaker. i have BIG respect for this!!!

bye =^^=
person BlueEyes
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How COULD YOU LEVE IT WITH A CLIFFHANGER AND WITH ONE CHAPTER TO GO FOR

SIX WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT just cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!
person CrimsonSin
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffhangers and it the second to the last chapter to I’m on edge Vegeta can't die I would be so pist if that happened. PLASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kitana Chou
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What happens next!!!!!

You can't just...... *dies*
person Irol
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, thats crazy. poor goku he was so worried abut vegeta he left the baby at home. vegeta won't be happy about that when he wakes up i imagine...this was great as always.
person kit-kit
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved the that the baby was born i hope vegeta doesn't die
person The w00t Girl
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Goku and Vegeta, won't life ever throw them a bone XD maybe not a bone but make things a bit easier for them. Thought it is good and glad to see that you've updated it. :D

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