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You son of a bitch! How could you end a chapter in such a point??!! You realise I'll die waiting for your next update??!! How could you, you mean mean.... AUTHOR! No cliffies! their horrible...
please pleaseeee update soon... or you'll be responsible of my death.... *falls crying on the floor*

omg omg omg fuck fuck fuck fuck. u better not kill vegeta..omg..ppl will HATE you..holy crap...do not let him die..omg i'm lke crying and freaking out and screaming all at once. sht shit shit shit shit. o man please x 7568356 don't let vegeta die. whats her name just came back( i can't spell it) omfg don't let him die..this would be the worst story if he did( k well not ACTUALY the worst) but i would like die..don't. let.vegeta. die

I love this chapter I am happy that Vageta had the baby but I am sad to see the story end. I can not what to read the next chapter I just have to know what happen to Vageta I just like Goku for them to go though so much together and have the possibility that Vegeta might die is too much. SO PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SssssOOOONNNNN.

Jesus Christ!!!! This was a mountain of emotions. You certainly know how to make me jumpo off my seat with this things...

Vegeta is going to be ok, right?

Right?

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I LOVE CHAPTER 30 I AM ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LOVE YOUR YOUR WRITING STYLE. PLAESE CONTINUE TO WRITTNG MORE ABOUT THE SAYIANS WE ALL KNOW AND LOVE TOO READ ABOUT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Lol, I don't know what but I thought the ending was so funny. All of them are just .... crazy but that's why I love it!!!!

Good story; I love watching how your writing evolves ^-^

Okay, this were a lot of information, emotion an another "otions"

I have to say that I'm happy to read about a new baby, and the image of Vegeta looking himself in the mirror with that precious balloon, je je

Andrew the Seventeen!!!!!!! O_O

Well, you have a mountain of imagination...

i was worried because i did not see you post for a while. i totally enjoy this story. i can't believe it is seventeen!!!!!! i would love to had read vegeta reaction to kamala news. i love the direction the story is going. also what appendage is vegeta talking about ? to my thinking only his nipples should be getting large because of mammary glands or did he form breasts? i am sure if goku is enjoying both very much. plus how will kamala and gohan fight to mate when kamala is pregnant? i can't wait to read more. you are a excellent writer with great imagination.

I like this story and all but when is it going to get back to being about Goku and Vegeta.
I can see why you are writing about Kamala and Gohan to thy up loses ends but enough is enough this story is supposed to be about Goku and Vegeta a not Kamala and Gohan. Love the story but please get back to who the story is supposed to be about.