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i love you! this is great, i've been missing this fic, i love it!

Wonderful! I hope everything gets sorted out soon. :)

wow i never thought andrew and 17 were the same and raaveen wasn't mad.

heyy. well u did it again. another sweet chapter . yeah . u did explain how to pronounce his name really good. i had it rite the first time so it was all good. this was a great chapter. i liked the part where goku was like i'm not having my grandchild grow up without a father and then gohan was about to say somethig about goten . i was like burn! lol i was scared tho. i thot they were gonna leave and i was like omg. please no .lol aww and i felt so bad for vegeta. he's insecure about his body. poor baby. lol

well i'm talking much too much again. but yeah i really love this story. i check everyday to see if it's updated. and if it's not i go on myspace to occupy my time. lol .

anywho .ttyl <3

Ah! news things to watch!

Yeah, I like this fic, the whole time that I expense reading the formers prequels is worthy, a lot. The way, the words, everything is perfect.

You know you're right!!!

n_n

Keep doing!!

hey i love this story...i had to stop reading it for a while bc i had no internet for a while. the last time i read it was when goku and vegeta were having some problems or whatever and vegeta stayed at capsule corp. for a while. so when i got my internet back like yesterday i came straight here and was like holy hell...look at all the new chapters. hmm so i have a problem. and maybe, i don't know, maybe u already aswered this question but how do u pronounce KARELA's name?, because i'm pronouncing it like 100 different ways.

lol whatever i'm dumb like that. so um i really like how it's about goku and vegeta's pregnancy, yet you have other couples in here too. i like that alot. makes it a real story instead of just another group of chapters on a fanfiction site.

and that andrew guy..he reminds me of a certain android. android 17? hmm??..

oh. oh. oh and PLEASE do not have anyone dying in this story i beg of you. that would really make my life hell. lol. i was already so so so sad when u killed ahrae. (thats how u spell it rite?) and now they can't bring herback. o but nvm they can! cloneing rite?

wow i am talking way too much. oo and don't end it rite at the birth of the baby. make it like so it's like 2 years later or something. lol whatever don't listen to me. it's ot my endding to write. my badd

hmm ok well i guess i should go now. i'm talking much to much.


your story's are kick ass.

so um peace out? <3
-Kareen;*

wow raveen got a friend

Hello there!!!!!!!!

O_O

A lemon!!!... yummy... je je je

At least the things are going to change a bit now, but ...

What are you planning to do to my Veggie? He can't suffer anymore! T_T Don't be evil..

I was wondering if Vegeta will be agreed to fed his baby like Raaven XD

Anyway, don't listen me! I'm noisy and crazy, you keep writing...

You know you're right!! n_n

and to think vegeta had the nerve to say that gohan and kamala wasn't having sex im starting to think the prince of all sayians is losing his touch. of course i think gohan and kamala could of found a better place to have sex then inside raveen house in a chair. im sure raveen is going to be mad when he sees that broken chair.

you know... Kamala means horrible in Finish...