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Gorgeous like always, jejeje well, Trunks show a face that I din't expect to see to soon but at leat Goten is alive... I don't know what to say because this chapter was one of my favorites...

Keep writing, you know you're right

ok i think were getting somewhere with kamala and gohan

i love your stories especially this one. Please continue to write more in the coming future. i would love to see ravaan with someone maybe raditz in the future. trunks and goten relationship blossum and mature and alo gohan and kamala. i am love to see goku and vegata act with a growing family and scene with them and little vegata.i just love reading your update sometimes more than once. you are a wonderful writer with a great imagine to.

yes! update, at least im not reading at 5 in the morning this time eh? this is a great fic, can't wait for the rest.

this is an amazing story. all three of them, i've read them all in just the past couple days. stayed up till 5 last ngiht. im so ready to read the next chapter of this one!

First I want to say this story has kept entertained for many long and pleasurable hours! I'm sorry I didn't review before, I'm usually lazy, but your story deserves every comment.
Your characterization is incredible, very convincing and interesting. This fic is fun, loving, exciting and very very addictive! I usually stay away from mpreggie fics because they're...errr...they can be very stupid and repetitive, they try to portray the pregnant one as a woman ?_? heck, if I wanted to read about a woman I wouldn't be reading yaoi, would I? But your version made me believe that anything is possible as long as it's well written, Vegita is still...Vegita, and that's great!
I can't wait to read more and more!
Thanks for writing and sharing!
Hugs

one word wow

Gods!!!!
Well, Kamala need an advice about romance with urgency. I like this chapter, except the part where Gohan didn't say the right words -men- I hope that it quickly pass... or at least Goku won't get mad for the Gohan's scent in Veggie u_u

How long is going to take for the baby borns?

Keep writing, you know you're right n_n

this is a great story. i read the prevoius story to this one and this continuation is wonderful. i hope that the birth comes really soon!!!

Hey, long time no see. Sorry i havent been in contact, lots been going on over here. For a while i didnt have internet access. I like this chapter, it gave me a much needed laugh... gohan and porno, lol. And trunks and gohan, lovely. Why dont you send me an email if you have the chance?