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by chayron

person Chrys
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im usually not the one to read DBZ fanfictions ( though I am a HUGE DBZ fan!), Im more into Naruto and Inuyasha ..but I must say that I really enjoyed To Hell Together, Come Together and Playing Home. I was rather impressed with them. I like the dynamics between Vegeta and Goku and how you play mostly in character for them ( I say mostly cause we all know how Vegeta is LOL) Im anxsious(sp?) to see what happens between the Saiyans.. Im curious to know if there will be something between Gohan and Kamala.. and what will happen to Raaven.. anyway Thanx for the wonderfull story so far and looking forward to your next chapter!

Chrys
person kit-kit
schedule May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this chapter was so funny
person Kugatsu
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An easy chapter that was nice and casual. I liked reading it. In between time is the best to write because it has so much potential. It's like...a good filler episode in an anime.

Enjoyed it. Thanks!
person ~anz~
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Bulma's mom's a pervert?!

I didn't think she was blind...but I always thought she spent a little too much time sipping the cooking sherry!

Nice to know...she drools over fine Saiyan flesh too!

Can't wait for Vegeta to have the baby so he can beat Goku's yes! yes!


And drop kick him all over the planet!!!


This is so fun! Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person kit-kit
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice i like this chapter it just seemed to flow and so a peace that vegeta has
person Jemie
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love your story, it's so good, I loved this chapter, more or less the ending part, totally in love with it, can't wait to see what happens next.. “Let’s go get the damn cake.” lmfao
person Kugatsu
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh i loved it! Of course I always love your updates! Vegeta is just sooo cute pregant...so cute.
person kit-kit
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow was that last part part of goku plan
person Webtester01
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It had me laughing a lot.

Looks like Vegeta has another friend.
person raptree
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first id like to say this is the best dbz fics ive ever read hands down. i cant wait for you to continue with the next chapter since now im hooked completely. i hope to be seeing your latest chapter soon keep the yaoi coming.

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