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by chayron

person Kugatsu
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh stupid Yamcha...I liked teh goku vegeta interaction here though. So sweet and classic.
person kit-kit
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah i guess thats the most important thing is how to look goku and vegeta in the eye after what he heard.
person ~anz~ ^_~
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goku had better keep his dick in his pants!!! He's got the hots for somone and it ain't Vegeta!

Liked the old 'my dick's bigger than yours' competion thingy!

Poor Yaumcha! Can he keep a straight face?! or will the Pregnant Prince of Saiyans blast him a new ass!?

Tune in tomorrow.... KakaGoku... cheat on Vegeta if you want to, I hope you get ALL of his labor pains!
person Webtester01
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I wonder what Yamcha is going to do.....

I hope Raaven can be helped.

Keep it up.
person Kugatsu
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh Vegeta's past....
person ~anz~
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well at least now we know WHY he has panic attacks...

Good for Zarbon...I would've killed the snivelling thinks he's all that bastard too. Humiliate then annihilate... now that's the ticket...

as for the large hips and nice tailed Saiyan: ah, well... the best laid plans...
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good written, that was a very interresting sight of Vegeta's past.. Goku can be such a ninny sometimes *rolling eyes* some things are better let unknown wouldn't you say? hm...

I didn't expect this Zarbon I really enjoyed it *chuckles*

aawwww..... The ending of this chapter was sweet though, well done.

I'll be looking out for more of this story, so succes with writting the rest.

Later^^
person Webtester01
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter. Now we understand where Vegeta is coming from.

:D

person kit-kit
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i like finding out more about vegeta
person Serpent
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story so far, i can't wait for more. Love it love it love it!! more pelase!

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