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WOWIE! I can\'t wait to read more this is AWESOME..
Darn I was really holding my breath while reading, thank goodness nothing bad happened to Vegita and their baby *sighs relieved*

PLZ update soon.

there was a big chunk in teh middle that threw me off and really just seemed expository for no reason at all. Over allthough, I\'m so happy to see an update.

I still love the story.

:) That\'s right Smile.. So why don\'t you just unglue your lips from TheChiChiSlaughterHouse\'s ass and go ahead and kiss mine. Besides, in MY opinion uke Vegeta is a complete slap in the face to the actual character Vegeta in the series. Nothing more than a sniveling, pitiable moron that scampers around like a domesticated house pet, wagging his figurative tale to appease his flawless \"master\" Goku.

Is anyone else here seeing a contrast in characters?

Now, I\'m all for originality but can\'t we at least leave a tiny bit of dignity to the original Vegeta? I find it highly offensive that TCCSH calls seme Vegeta a fad when I\'ve written him that way and made a fucking masterpiece out of it. I don\'t think it really has that much to do with uke/seme so much as the author writing them that way (though I still will say, I\'ve never met an author I thought wrote uke Vegeta even mildly well).

I dunno.... maybe it just has something to do with MINORS on an ADULT site preferring him that way. Ignore it Chayron (if you choose to) and keep doing what you\'re doing. Still impresses me how fast you update these things!

Camaro

nice chapter i thought it was very relaxed and easygoing

VERY GOOD STORY BUT IS THE BABY A BOY OR A GIRL I THINK IT WOULD BE A VERY GOOD PLOT TWIST IF IT WAS A GIRL I LIKED THE STORY WRIGHT ON

Ooh good one.

Keep it up.

Well since you yourself said that the review button is here for a reasonI have a fewquetions. Now I\'m sure you didn\'t mean to offend chichislaughterhouse or anything but to Criticize someone and to give them advice are two different things. You put your own personal feelings into your review because you view Ukes as something different. I know that not all ukes are portrayed as hopeless wimps but to be a uke you must have a seme and wheter you like it or not being a uke is not commonly known for being the stronger of the two in a relationship. To say that the very act of portraying a uke as such would take away from the character is like saying that everyone must write without ooc\'s. Some poeple like to write differently and in your stories while vegeta may not be a bride he is the one being a uke and his seme protects him. I\'m not saying this to be mean but to hope that you see that to yell at someone for what they choose to write is wrong. If you like \"mature\" writers I suggest you not read any other stories because we all start out as amateurs and we all have our own ideas. Don\'t be so harsh and then fake an apology that still sends across your disgust. It only makes you look immature.

nice

wow that chapter had a lot of ups and downs and one of these days i\'ll get around to reading deep circle but i\'ve been a little busy lately. great chpater update soon!

wow you had me so worried in the beginning but now im better