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for Sweet as Honey

by xkesshoux

person radcat
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. Full of angst and the problems that people get themselves into. Just like in real life people can play too many games and eventually get themselves and other people burned. The sad part is that people bring others into their drama and hurt them also. Roy thought he could always get away with playing games and manipulating people but found that the games got out of control and hurt himself and Ed and Jean. You could feel what had been between the 2 adults which drug Ed down with them. The fact that Ed and Jean were able to find something between the two of them is amazing. Too bad for Roy but maybe he need to finally learn a lesson. Was Resolution the last chapter?
person Qweschin
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG just why cant they all get along!! *emos* this is the end? finish? noooo i need to see what happens...continue please??
person Arra
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! NO! NO! NO! Why couldn't he just leave Ed!? I hate to see Roy that way! Poor Roy! *Sniff sniff* I felt so bad for him. The way he gave Jean everything... But it was a well written story, nonetheless. It was very sad in the end. And I guess that ending was the best one, although I like the HavocxRoy pairing better than HavocxEd. The lyrics to Backstreet Boys - Just Want You To Know would've fit in the end. Like if Roy had sung it. Lol. *Play song for Roy*
person Blonde Hayate
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww sweet with abit of sex in it.
Great way to end it.
person kai
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its cute and sad at the same time. keep it up ^-^
person Pickles
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You...you tricked me! I thought it was a new chapter! How evil! XD You raised my hope, and then you shot me down. I guess we'll all just have to wait eh?
person Alex
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG plese keep writing....this is one of the best FMA fanfics I've ever read. It has all three of my favorite pairing...don't stop now I need to know how it ends.
person ~blue angel~
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nobody reviewed?!!! that's insane! this is one of the most moving stories i've ever read! it made me cry *sniff* I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
person Saishi
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! I have a few character issues, but they\'re mainly my own hangups, not anything wrong with the story at ALL. Keep up the great work, I can\'t wait to read more!
person raighne
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... please, please continue this! I must see what you do with the pieces of all these wonderfully messed up boys.

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