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I thought it was a good story and would like to see another chapter.

I really love this story,I keep checking back for the fifth chapter,and when it didnt come up the past times,I jusr decided to review,so please update,if you need Ideas i will write default chapters and send them to you

This is one of the best well-written sex fanfics I\'ve ever read so far.... O.O And this is my first time reading an EdxHavoc fic, too! I think you gave me another favorite yaoi coupling. XD Keep going! I feel very bad for Roy... I\'d like to see him be somehow happy in the end (even if he DID bring his problem upon himself).

Oh please. PLEASE continue. This is one of the best written, works of art here. If you think I\'m over-exagerating(however you spell that) than you have not seen some of the shit that people call porn these days. I beg you to continue. PLEASE!

As stupid as it sounds this story is all I\'ve ever wanted in a fanfic. It was just...perfect! I love it, so please continue. =)

Poor Roy.... He and Ed are my favorite characters...

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!
There, someone told you to do so. Now DO IT, PLEASE!
I love this fic; it\'s so in-depth!

This story is incredibly written. It\'s so nice to see Edward with some weakness and Havoc with a back bone. Their relationship is started on impulse and you assume that it\'s only going to be a one-shot, or at the most a threesome fic. But it\'s not, you see the desperation that Edward feeling, wanting to have a stable relationship instead of one with a womanizer. It\'s understandable, Havoc\'s choices in the fic are often made from his heart, and though you want to smack him upside his head to snap it outta him, the writer here gives you plenty of reasons for why Havoc is acting this way. Not only that, Mustang is portrayed in a way that makes him human. Other writers make him sound so holy, and never wrong, and never makes mistakes. But it\'s nice to see Roy on his knees(figuratively and literally) because you can sympathize with him. You want him to stop, to get up and act like the Colonel you\'re use to but if that were to happen, it\'d be easier just to hate Roy.

The story is strong and gets you wanting to see more. Makes you want to see how everything comes to an end.

The pacing flows and there\'s never a moment where you going, \"But wasn\'t he just-?\" It\'s completely natural.

The characters are sometimes a little extreme but in view of the whole story it can be over looked.

Overall, I can easily and happily give this story a a five out of five, ten out of ten and twenty out of twenty. It\'s a good story with strong relationships, and characters. You want everything either to end with a cute little bow or everyone crashing and burning(but in a good way). This is one of those fic that makes you proud to say, yeah, that\'s my fandom right there! \"Sweet as Honey\" will now always be the Havoc/Ed story that I compare all other Havoc/Ed stories to.

keep writing! I love where this is going. It\'s always so hard to find *GOOD* havocxed ficcage... I like I like royxed too... and you\'ve just piled them all into one great story, so please continue on, for I will definitely keep reading!

*gives you cookies*

I know the feeling, but I love your story. It has a plot, character development, and a story line that hasn\'t been done to death. Even if you don\'t hear from anyone else I hope you continue.