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for Sweet as Honey

by xkesshoux

person tuna
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well. i still haven\'t reread three all the way through yet, but this chappie made my angst monkey happy. I love the smut, but I love plot too.

I\'m too tired to do a really really detailed review, but if you don\'t keep writing this I\'m gonna beat you with a rusty straw. ^__^
person possessed_penguin
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... o_o .... *has fallen in love* OMFG! You MUST continue!!! If you don\'t, I\'ll... I\'ll... damnit, what\'ll I do? ...I\'ll CRY! Not exactly effective but this is a great fic! Please continued it!!!
person K2
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm..funny im not much of a reviewer on stories, but I loved the plot ya created, makes it more worthwhile reading. Hope you continue its been a while hasn\'t it?
person Kairan Akiyama
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Don\'t quit! Pwease? *holds up an Ed plushie* Ed-kun wants you to smile. Anyway, I have some fics here too, so if you want to read instead of just writing, drop by. YGO and Beyblade (well, one Beyblade one). Now that the shameless plug is over...

I LIKE IT! This makes me want to watch FMA now (I\'ve seen bits and pieces.... and want an Ed action figure BAD. what he and Setro and Andromeda could do.... XP) Anyway, no, keep going! I want to see how this plays out. You can\'t leave me hanging like this. I\'ll send my villagers after you! >
person mauztattoo
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this! The angst and the idea that Roy Mustang isn\'t getting EVERYTHING he wants is great! Please finish this so i can see where you are going with this threesome (will it end up as a threesome?)
person Terry
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Havoc, it\'s your birthday! Damn he\'s all alpha or something, he nailed Ed and Roy. Also can I say: HOT! I only read two chapters so far, but I had to comment before going on. This is great.
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I have rewieved all of your chappies of Sweet as Honey and always positively ^_^ I really like the Havoc x Ed pairing and Roy x Havoc pairing. The sory is slightly too angsty for my liking but somehow I still like it very much. It is interesting to \'see\' the vulnerable side of Roy for a change without making him too...girly. I can\'t imagine how you will continue the story, but I must admit I hope that it will have something nice for Roy too. Even though Havoc and Roy are awsome together.
Okay, I\'ll BEG you to continue the story *begs*
I have no complains about the...uh plot or anything else.
Yup, that\'s it. Write more soon!
person Oboro
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH!! You have to keep writing!! The plot is really engrossing, and this is the best love triangle fic I\'ve ever read!! Please, please continue!! I\'m begging you! *puppy dog eyes*

This chap was really good, and I love the interation between the three of them. You\'re writing is amazing, and I\'m surprised no one has reviewed this fic as much as it deserves. Again, please keep it up, and know that there are people who really enjoy this fic. Another chap, onegai!!
person wicked_pistil
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How have I not commented on this? I could have sworn that I had...

Anyway, I ache for each new chapter of this. So hot, so much love for all your characters. I love seeing Roy being all vulnerable and *wanting.* So do please keep writing. Your smex is like no other\'s and I have all of your chapters saved to text files on my computer so I never lose them.
person nirvana
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry i haven\'t reviewed your story yet, but this was the pefect time to comment on how absolutely wonderful and smexyful the whole lovely has been. Plot\'s are a pain in the arse though, aren\'t they? Can\'t write anything without adding something or another. I know how you feel.

hope to see the next chapter soon!!

~Nirvana Renegade Seiga, at ya service

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