rate_review Reviews

What! No! Don\'t stop! I totally love it! I\'ve been reading since the first chapter and I love the fact that it actually has a plot, pretty good at that. I feel sorry for all three guys, though, and I hope for a happy ending. Nevertheless, whatever you decide will be good, just don\'t leave them heartbroken like that, Please O.OKeep writing!!!

Obviously, we all love it, so make sure to write bloody MORE! ;D

This was a sexy sexy fic.


I love the imagery and Havoc basically stealing Ed away from Roy. Honestly, this brings me closer to the circle of HavocxEd

I shall read more of your stuff, cause you can actually write, unlike a lot of people I read.

Havoc x Roy..? And I mean really Havoc x Roy, not Roy x Havoc! Damn, that was so fucking hot. I can\'t say much more, my brain refuses to work after all that hawtness. I loved the first chappie, but this was just TOO good *purrs*
Okay, I think I can make understandable sentences now. I think the story ( with or without plot) was damn well written. And I can\'t get enough of uke-Roy. Also, it is not too angsty, I don\'t like very angsty stories.
Anyways, I bow to you. Great work, write more please!

This is such a great story, and I can honestly say I never considered Havoc x Ed or Havoc x Roy until I read this. You did an excellent job in keeping everyone in character and wrote some awesomely descriptive lemon scenes. I fully enjoyed both chapters and I\'m looking forward to the next one ^_^ You\'re an excellent writer and I definitely will be re-reading this!

It was such a sweet chapter T T...
I like the take on Havoc and Roy\'s relationship. So simple and complicated at the same time...

Oh man, and I thought the first chap was hot!! When I first read this fic, I was blown away by the amazing way in which you write sex scenes. But after reading the second chapter, I couldn\'t beleive it!! It more than topped the first (even thought is was great also ^_^) and I was glad you decided to do more. I adore your writing stlyle and eat up every word. Keep going, can\'t wait for more!!

omg that was soooooo freakin hot, the first chapter then the second, damn your good at writing love scenes, wish I had that talent...whew..sweatin here..and I just love the Ed/Havoc pairing as well as the Roy/Havoc pairing...and I soooooo love that it was HAVOC that left Roy...hahaha, he deserved it..hehe..but ummm they best do something quick before Ed transmutes them into something not terribly nice lol...was wondering though, did Havoc really desire Ed or was he just using Ed to pay Mustang back??? and if so...Ed best make them BOTH beg him before he lets them touch him again...that would be soo good..hehe anyhow great chapters, cant wait for the 3rd and hopefully the 4th...till then huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

O.O ...i think ed or havoc could be fucking a coatrack, and you could\'ve made it sexy... ::goes to see if you\'ve written more fics, must read them even if they happen to be... elricest.. ew...::

O_O That was great. Love the smut, went straight to my groin. >>; ::ahem:: Anyways, write more, hell, I\'ll RP it with you when you have a computer.