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for The Last Temptation of Edward Elric

by sailormac

person Safir84
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shit, this was so good, it was almost like watching the anime, I totally loved it! The plot was great and the character descriptions were awesome as well, and the the fic was very well written, which I loved! Furtermore the twist was absolutely priceless, I mean; Mustang as a matchmaker, hehe, what a wonderful idea!

Thanks for sharing such a delicious story with us, and the smut was pretty damn hot as well!

Well done!

person Luca
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If that wasn't absolutely funny and sweet and hot, I don't know what was! Excellent twists, wonderful character and a lovely dash of angst!

By far, one of my favourite FMA fics! Love the pairing too! ^_~
person nutmeg
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!
person Hikaru Irving
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that IS rich! lol, and here I was thinking that Roy wanted to take Ed back. *snicker*
Now I\'ve got another story idea . . .
*slaps her forehead*
And I thought the best FMA triangle was Envy/Ed/Roy . . .*snicker*
KEEP WRITING!
~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~
person lolo313
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should make a sequel where Al is back to normal and he follows in his brother\'s foot steps with russel\'s brother. i think it would be an awsome story. please please continue!!
person Ri
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! ^_________^
person Asidian
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*griiin*

Okay, this was just fantastically cute. It\'s rare that you run across a Roy-as-past-lover fic and rarer still for Ed to be with Russel. Nicely characterized, nicely written, and oh so deliciously dirty. ^__^

Roy as matchmaker is -hilarious-. Nice stuff. XD
person Sherri
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was SO good and just... hot! I love how you wrote vocals into the sex scene. It\'s a nice change from most of the stories that just describe the sex scene without elborating on any talking, etc. This was a very good story, and I hope you will continue it -- or if you don\'t continue this story, I would love to see more Edward x Russell writings from you. I love Edward x Russell (it\'s my damn OTP but it\'s WAY too hard to find!) and this is probably the best Ed x Russell I\'ve read. Keep up the good work!
person MeLaiya
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot damn that was hot. I loved this, pulled me in and had me captivated from the first line. Keep up the good work.
person aspiker
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute! It\'s a very good beginning. It will be interesting to see where you will take this. (I\'m assuming this isn\'t a one-shot since Roy always has a ulterior motive behind what he does...)

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