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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story. The plot will be very interesting once you get this story moving I bet. ^-^ I hope that you update soon. As for who I wish the Reader will pair up with from the five pilots. i believe that Wufei would be an interesting choice. i mean he would be a challene because he has to get over his dead wife and to do that he needs to move forward. Or perhaps Trowa. Trowa has no background and because he has no background there isn\'t much romance between him and others. But for Heero, Duo, or Quatre...I don\'t know. We know that Relena is stalking Heero, and a love triangle would be funny; however it doesn\'t seem as if it would be original. Duo is another one that is used a lot in stories because of his personality. So he\'s cute, lovable, and a trouble maker. Doesn\'t mean he can have the Reader all to himself now. ^-^ And Quatre...can you imagine Quatre as someone\'s boyfriend. I think he would be good for romantic reasons, however he will be blinded by love and probably cause more problems.
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^_^;;; of course it is your story and you can do whatever you wish to do. I was just merely pointing out some things and possibly giving you some ideas...maybe. But I really do think that this story will rock. I love the beginning already.
Well, ja ne and I hope that you will update soon. ^-^
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^_^;;; of course it is your story and you can do whatever you wish to do. I was just merely pointing out some things and possibly giving you some ideas...maybe. But I really do think that this story will rock. I love the beginning already.
Well, ja ne and I hope that you will update soon. ^-^
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting, cant wait till u update!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is intrigueing so far. Keep up the good work. I personally absolutely adore Duo by the way
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ this is very intresting...if if I were to choose who would it be I have no clue there are so many choices but I would mostly choose Heero or Duo
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...why is heero cranky on his birthday? set me up with duo, please!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! I like it. I think you should keep going. I hope your future chapters are at least a bit longer. And I don\'t really mind who I\'m paired with. X3 They\'re all good with me.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No one wants to see some stupid Mary-Sue wanna be.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is quite a nice start. The flashback and Heero\'s snappiness was rather intriguing. However, you may want to reread this chapter for errors to correct; I spotted just a few little ones, such as a bit of mis-capitalization and a \"your\" instead of \"you\'re\", so it\'s nothing too big. In any case, I hope you continue this! :)