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for A Home in Common

by Michalyn

person volume
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very well exicuted. Sometimes authors have difficulty with 05 but with your vocabulary and symbolism, I really think you nailed it.
person tainted_love
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this story sweet and sentimental. I don\'t have any children, but I thought that you portrayed the relationship between father and daughter beautifully, as I\'ve always been somewhat of a daddy\'s girl myself. I also have a question: Did you ever get those chapters betaed? Because I thought your grammar and such seemed very good, although I did catch a few errors, probably merely typing errors. If you still were going to get them done, and if the person who normally does them for you is busy, I\'d love to do it for you. Write me a note if you\'re interested at all.
person Fizzy
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious....that\'s THE END!!! and i thought my night couldn\'t get worse...i\'ll miss this story...it\'s one of my favourites...really it is...it\'s so real to me...I love it...i love you babe...Until We Meet Again
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, the resolution we\'ve all been waiting for. :D mm-mm good. XD very, very nice. there was nothing left hanging there and, while i was briefly held upon the assumption that the ending was going to be spectacularly angst-tastic, the ending felt developed and confronted what needed to be. thank you for breathing some life into a community flooded with the same-ol-same-ol. ^__^
person lo
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It started out good, but it seemed like you just got tired of writing. I am a little surprised, near the end things really were not clear. I could not not finish it. I hope you feel up to writing for real next time. I do not get it. Were you rushed?? were you sick of the story??
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it continues to kill me that there are only twenty-one reviews for this story. D: this is, without a doubt, one of the best pieces of fiction i have ever read, regardless of pairing, fandom, or even genre. you are getting so little love- i swear to god, i\'m going to pimp this story so hard you won\'t know what hit ya\'. XD keep on truckin\', brave soldier!
person Kugatsu
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! Wufei! Just own up to your heart!!!

Gah! THis is killing me so sweetly!
person Rina
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you finally updated I\'m so happy!!!111! You are like one of the best authors here, your wrtiting is fantastic!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is overyjoyed* HOORAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER~! :D oh, i love this. normally i don\'t really do angst, but you do it so well that i can\'t help but get sucked in. you make everything incredibly real- pure genius, i say. ^__^ haha, i think i\'m going to read this chapter about a million more times until you update again. :P thank you for the new chapter! it was excellent, beta-ed or not. ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am slain~! This is WAY too good. Seriously. It\'s the sweetest and best-written piece of fiction that I\'ve seen in a long time and it\'s refreshing just looking at it. ^_^ The pairing is fabulous too, so no regrets there. Please update! It\'s excruciating having to wait. ;___;

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