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Yay finally one with ed on top,l so many roy ed\'s just wanted some ed roy

Heheh.

ED did most of the work except for the paying part Mustang was just in for the ride...LOL...that was GREAT:D

Hot and I loved it! Well done!

Mouahahah
It\'s the first time ever I read an Seme-Ed/Uke-Roy..!
I think it was pretty good!!^^
There\'re some litlle things that got me a little frustrated though..FIRST: It looks like it\'s a one-shot and it shouldn\'t..(Keep it on going damnit!!=^_^=lol)
And SECOND: well I think some parts and scenes could have been a little more developed...I really like details..(and I am NOT just talking about sex scenes!!)..what I mean is you have a great fic here (good ideas) and adding some more would make your story even more interesting.

Okay..I\'m not an expert...I\'m just telling you my impressions..(I actually thought of deleting my own fic like over a zillion times already..so jeez NO! I don\'t think of myself as being a great writer!!^^)

If you ever have a second chap or a sequel for this I\'ll be waiting then cause I really like the basic idea of this whole thing..!

So if you ever want to come back at me for this review..well go ahead! You have my e-mail.=^.^=
Salut..