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August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Someone made a comic book version of this story. The art's not bad.
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very hot! you're very good in your writing, it flowed effortlessly. do you have any association with aquarina?
http://summerheat.smackjeeves.com/comics/588288/page-01/
i don't know and i don't care, but i love having the visual as well as the written version. they both have their perks ;)
http://summerheat.smackjeeves.com/comics/588288/page-01/
i don't know and i don't care, but i love having the visual as well as the written version. they both have their perks ;)
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please forgive if I've already reviewed this story. I finally got to see the doujin AquaSpirits drew for this. It follows the storyline wonderfully, plus it's smutty as all get out. Once I can afford it, I will have a copy for myself, and a couple for friends who also enjoy the EdxWinry pairing. Other than the sex, I enjoyed the realism of this story, Ed and Winry have to iron out some differences before they can proceed further in their relationship.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.O... Damn, that was.... well, it sort of reminded me of a roller coaster really, what with the affection then sudden agression and then right back to affection again. ::inwardly screams,"Make up your mind!" (lol) I think I enjoyed it, though Ed being aggressive is NOT my cup of tea... but it did make things interesting. Everything was sweet at first, then took a turn for the creepy real fast....o.o. Still, very nicely written. ^^ :) (:
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really should've said that Ed being TOO aggressive was not my cup of tea. I seriously doubt he'd scare Winry like that, so I believe it to be alittle out of character.... though that can hardly be avoided, you're a fan, not the great Hiromu herself. ::laughs::
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This was just awesome...I loved it. So very detailed and Winry and Ed were so in character...They we're making me laugh through the story, of trying to mak up their minds...Overall I thought it was very good Ed/Win story! Definitely keep up the good writing skills..:)
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!! I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story and that I hope that you write more!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW That was AWSWM!
Well if that's how you spell awsum?
Man...this fic was soo detail it...soooo not out off character....soooo amazing
You made it sound so reswl i could of allmost feel i was there watching them (Really but please don't flame me)
I'm not very good at writing Lime fics...but a vwery good reader you can count on that.....and I know a awswum fic when I see one I tell you and this is one of the top ones!
Well if that's how you spell awsum?
Man...this fic was soo detail it...soooo not out off character....soooo amazing
You made it sound so reswl i could of allmost feel i was there watching them (Really but please don't flame me)
I'm not very good at writing Lime fics...but a vwery good reader you can count on that.....and I know a awswum fic when I see one I tell you and this is one of the top ones!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have to write this review, u deserve it! This fic was hottness and u can write freakin good. I was so caught up in the story I couldn\'t hear my parents call me. U don\'t understand this was like the best Ed and Winry fic ever! I read half of them so far, but Ed\'s potrayle, was so hot man. Yeah he was like crazy rough, and he kinda scared me, I felt like I was Winry, but I think he\'s sexy like that. I like rough bad boys. Okay...well um...the best. I will read sequel now ^_^
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh pleaseplease, for the love of all that\'s holy, write Dom!Winry next?! i would love you so soo much!
Ed\'s personality and the way he talked kind of reminded me of Inuyasha..
Ed\'s personality and the way he talked kind of reminded me of Inuyasha..