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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued by your extensive detail!! Very touching. :)
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fanfiction was awesome. I reallly enjoyed reading it. Winry/Edward is a very nice couple to read about.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was extremely well written, however my only concern with the story is that it really sounds nothing like Ed when he\'s doing the extreme amounts of demanding. Once again, very well written, but somehow I kept imagining that the writing/actions would have been more appropriate for some other possible character. However, I can overlook that and see how great this piece was on its own and acknowledge writer creativity. Good job.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is AWESOME. Oh my God. This si the most turned on I have been in a long time~ argh. Damn you! Keep up the good work, you are truly gifted...so I\'m jealous. j/k <3, Aerith
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhm it started off good, but then it lost my intrest about 1/4 down, its a very long chapter adn thats always good, but too much rambling and not enough actually hapening. this one of the first no Yoi Fullmetal alchamists and it seems good, but u grag it out fo rtoo long =/
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think Ed was way too rough. But it turned out alright^^Oooo, is there going to be a \'next time\'?=)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was hot i couldnt believe that you made that such a good story i loved it
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dang i had to read that a second time it left me breathless oooooohh i wish that was me
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. This has to be one of the best Ed/Winry lemons I\'ve ever read. Although it could be said that Ed was a little OOC...I loved how you portrayed him. The whole demanding, rough, yet sweet attitude...yeah, huge turn on; it made the whole story that much more enjoyable. You did an excellent job.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.. I like your eye for details, And it was quite long. I\'m quite impressed