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great fic, who to see more from you soon

oh my god, i can barely breath from how sexy and demanding edward was!!! sheesh, you know when you get so into something, it\'s almost funny? i\'m laughing at myself: i was whispering these encuragements to ed and i\'ve NEVER done anything half as pathetic as talk to fanfic charactrers before. this should just tell you how fabulous this was. nicely nicely done!!!

Wonderful. Absolutly wonderful. You have a very nice writing style. You described everything beautifully and sensually with just the right amount of emotion behind those descriptions. Keep up the good work.

-B

Winry was being so indecisive, and Ed was bring so dominatrix....IT WAS HOT! WOW, I LOVED IT! Gosh, Winry kinda pissed me off in this fic, but I can\'t blame her for being mad; I mean if the guy that I loved for so long didn\'t notice me to the point that I gave up on him, and then one night all of a sudden he was coming on to me, I would be pretty confused! But I\'ll make an exception with Ed, he\'s so sexy! I really did love this fic! Are you gonna make another one? PLEASE DO!