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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this fic soon, I\'m a bit confused about the pairings in this but will keep reading. I\'m glad someone finally put a My Chemical Romance song in their fic, I love that band.
Great fic and I hope you update soon.
Great fic and I hope you update soon.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read it, and it\'s really good! But just one thing to correct: Kai\'s (and unfortunately Voltaire\'s, too...) name is Hiwatari, not Hitawara. If you use that name again, please, wrote it like that. It just annoys me to see it wrong... but it\'s your choise! Please update soon!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!!! Please give me more!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Update as soon as possible!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this could turn into a good story line, but one tip everything leads off to the other too quickly, maybe u could linger on something longer? U know, some of Kai\'s past, how he found out exactly etc.. Ok, who am I to be a critic right? Let\'s call it opinion, I like the way this story is going, please update \'k?
Hope 2 read more soon, like I said a lot of um what\'s that word... ok how can I put it... this beginning has the making of a good story? How did that sound?
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Hope 2 read more soon, like I said a lot of um what\'s that word... ok how can I put it... this beginning has the making of a good story? How did that sound?
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kai sounded cute near teh end...
Voltaire is a evil bastard... *glare*
Well done!
Voltaire is a evil bastard... *glare*
Well done!