rate_review Reviews

My god! So sexy!

Yay, yay, that was good.

Oh...my..God...BRILLIANT! I loved it! This is like the fourth story of your's I've read and I absolutely adore it. You see Vegeta's sensitive side, you see his pride, and you see his love for Bulma. Their relationship is awesome and you pulled it off nicely. Great stuff!

This was a WONDERFUL short! Your writng style is incredible!! Many thanks to your betas who helped you shape this piece into a sheer delight to read! And trust me... thare are a lot of B/V stories out there, but what counts is that the story is told in a way that leaves your reader breathless, and you\'ve very well accomplished that with me! Please continue to write!

gokusgirl >_-

Arrrgh! How is it you manage to make Vegeta strong and vulnerable at the same time? I love your vision of him - battling demons no one can see and Bulma can only guess at. They make sure a wonderful couple in your stories - Vegeta finally getting the one person who is willing to try to understand him. The lemon is great - emotional and explicit without being raunchy. (Raunchy is good sometimes, but not always - :D )

Just browsing, and I come across a brand new story by you! *happy dances of joy*

I really liked the angle of this and the emotional depth you\'ve giving to Vegeta. It makes him more than a 2-dimentional persona that you seem to find in these types of stories. Yet, you do it in a way that even though he\'s vulnurable he\'s not weak. So many authors mix those up; equating vulnerability with weakness. You do not. I love your stories so much, I think, because you really are able to grasp the levels of a realtionship.

You have my undying admiration.


Wonderful fic.