rate_review Reviews

Good story...

Will read part two now... see you later

Bye

HAH! I love it, and OK now I can't wait to find out what Son Goku has done this time

Um, wow, ive never reviewed before so i dont really know what ur looking for. i really liked it, except that im a sucker for happy endings and i wanted gohan and mirai together but hey...since hes the town whore now just pass him over when ur done :P sorry that was wrong *blush* (secret fantasy of mine since like the 4 grade) anyways the house warming party was straight and the whole Trunks accidentally screwing Gohan was probably one of the best twists ive read so far. Props for that u genius whore(<--good thing by the way.) I cant wait to see what happens in part 2 but im kinda worried. Haha, does the fact that Goku bit Vegeta mean he cant fuck anybody else now? i hope so, id like to see his proud-ass pregnant or something and Goku having to stay with him...it'll give the other 4 a chance to work things out. :P Much Luv

That was so amazing great story i would like to see a sequel

For a wild romp of slutty fun, I think you did badass! *Kagome Chirp* See ya soon!

Wow... I\'m glad I stayed up \'til 2 in the morning to read all of this... ^^ Cuz the last chapter is my favorite. Never been too big a fan of Goten or Trunks sex for some odd reason... perhaps it\'s because of what GT did to their adult versions. c_C But yeah, good story... and I\'ll go read the sequel... um... ^^ later on cuz I\'m sleepy now. (I had to read chap 18 twice, so technically I went through 19 chapters) Keep up the good work! ^^

*only read the last chapter because the summary interested her and now is a big gooey pile on the floor* *.* *drools everywhere*

You evil evil person, you better write what happens soon! Please, Please, Please~I can\'t take it what happened to Goku and Vegeta!

Sequal please, and what happened to my dear Mirai? I hope to read more of your stories soon.

-Jenn

THANK-YOU!!! You made me so happy that I don\'t care about the ciffhanger! (sits back and grins stupidly for five minutes as result of long-awaited lemon)