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for Of Sex and Saiyans: Part one

by Hellagoddess

person None Given
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Claps hands while cheering* WOW! That was one of the best stories I have ever read. It was sooooo good and the lemons *falls over in a faint when she remembers goku and vegeta* Please I beg you to write a sequel! I don\'t know anout other people but I\'m willing to wait longer for the sequel. Oh and thank you for writing this story and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did. It was my pleasure to read it. Thank you! ^_^
person mystic banana
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*goes into yaoi induced spasms*
YEA! *dances with glee* Most excellent lemon. Yum.
person leaf
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter! Omg! Goku and Vegeta...*Snikers madly* I wanna see another story! I wanna see more, no epamacallit! I couldn\'t live with just one more chapter. I can scan some of the comic now and send it to you. Unfortunately....~_~ my scaner doesn\'t do well with screan tone (Thats the dots you see in maga) so I can\'t really scan the parts that I\'ve already put the stuff on....but i\'ll be sure to scan the lemon part before I tone it.
person Macha
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm, Very tastey!

Mwuahahahahahhahahahaah I want both. An epilog (sp?) and a sequeal. *nods*

*scratches head* Well, thank you for the compliments, but it\'s my beta readers who have the talent. Just be happy they are willing to go through what my twisted mind comes up with to make it readable.
person calicosoneji
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic fic!
loved the plot and especially liked the vxg lemon, lol
i really think you should do the sequal ^_^

~soneji~
person Blu
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are by far the best DragonballZ fanfiction writer!!
If I could give you an award I would, but unfortunately...I don\'t have any to give...sooo
I give you my deepest gratitude for completing my day with the best Goku/ Vegeta pairing.

Thank you!! ^_^

Blu
person Macha
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 17) Well, I have finally caught up. *grins* YAY.... now I will wait for your next update.

You don\'t really want to stop at 10 do you?
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
person Macha
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 12) I think there have only been 3 lemons. (hehehe)

*hangs head* I know my evil plot won\'t work, but I had to give it a try.
person Macha
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I can\'t stand it, I wasn\'t going to review until I had caught up the chapter 17... but DANG girl! (Or at least I hope that is the correct gender) Your chapters are getting better as they progress, and I am not talking just about the lemons (which are awesome by the way).

I am SO happy I decided to start reading this (I didn\'t read any of the reviews, I just thought I\'d give the story a shot) even though I have a long ways to catch up. Nice job, keep up the good work. (I think I am on chapter 9)

Macha

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