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goku/vegeta!!!!!!! PLEASE??!! I\'ve been waiting AGES!!! If it is not them I will be mad. Sorry if I get impatient. I would have reviewed earlier but my damn keyboard didn\'t work. So, please? I don\'t think I can wait much longer. (whimper)

damn that was one of the hottest chapter luved it looking forward to the next one

Actually, this chapter is a little scary...not because of the way you wrote it. It is wonderfully written...it\'s just...I came up with the SAME damned lemon...there are slight differences (like pairings), but still the same. See, I\'ve been drawing a comic to sell at the Yaoi con this year...and over the labor day holiday, I was working on the last lemon in the comic strip (I\'d been devising this for a few months now, knew exactly how it was going to happen too.)...and well...I guess I was sorta inspired by your last chapter with Vegeta, Goku and Trunks...but anyways...just creepy. While my brothers never really touched each other and Vegeta was the center of the lemon...its still very creepy....(I was also very stuck on the damned thing! Not because I didn\'t know where it was going, but because it is hard for me to draw bodies...and all those damned muscles! THank Kami for Raditzu\'s Hair!)

Keep writing! JA NE!

GOKU VEGETA GOKU VEGETA!!!! *drool* Need... G/V lemon....

that was good! real good poor gohan though!

that was really great it would be good if that all just fuck eachother all ready lol can\'t wait 4 u to update

Amazing, that is all I can say...

Did not see that coming at all what mirai going to do. Is gohan going to kill his dad

::koolade smile:: demonstration --> ^________^!!
Yes, I kinda knew it would be Goku and that flashback was freakin\' awesome! STEAMY!!
I do really feel bad for Gohan and Mirai... I hope they can get back together with forgiveness sex...
^_^

Blu

poor gohan update soon