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You\'ve really changed the direction of the fic, me thinks it would be prudent to change the summary!! People would be reading it to witness a real Goku/Bulma relationship, not a story that is going in that direction.

good fic, though... people would read it for what it is

Ok if i want someone to love me i think thats what i\'ll do slam them in a wall ^~
I don\'t know what direction your going but it is very OOC for goku!!!!!

okay people the last chap is a dream sequence that I have not yet finished. I didn\'t want to tell you but since you already read it I might as well just type it in

Your story is getting real good.

I\'m not at all a huge fan of Bulma I feel pity for her in your story what is happening to her is extremely unfair where her \'perfect\' family is permenatly alternated by the \'unexpected\' death of her husband. But in the same token Goku\'s obsession for the woman is very interesting especially the lenghts he has gone thought in getting a \'new family to go with the new man\' that he belives that he has become.

For what its worth you\'ve roped one person indefinitely into your story, so please update.

Thank you

Sophia ;)

Ok, ok, now we got him in the house, the story is slowly evolving. It is good so far^_^

I think the issue here is that leaving reviews makes the writer feel that people have actually read their work. Just reading Hit Points doesn\'t tell you if people have actually taken the time to read through the story and take it all in.
It could have been just a look and a quick skim. *Shrug*
I get frustrated when no one reviews my stories coz then I can\'t make it even better the next time coz I don\'t know if I\'ve done anything that isn\'t working for other people.
Reviews, short or long, good or bad, nasty or nice are important. I personally want to see more reviews on mine so I can see a bigger picture of people\'s views of my work.

Anyway, the story is cool - I want you to update soon! ^_^

the story doesn\'t suck, you should keep on writing it

What the hell is this?! You totally made Goku go way OOC. If you want to write a DBZ story, do it right.

If you are more worried about people leaving member signed reviews rather than the lovely reviews that you already have then you don\'t need to be a writer.

Instead of jumping at your readers with both guns blazing because you don\'t have the number of reviews that you think you should have, you might try to post another chapter faster and thank the reviewers that have taken time out of their busy day to review you. Would you like to continue to read a story where the author yells at the readers because they didn\'t have time to review?

You have to look at things in perspective, the author takes time out of their day to write for others that want to read. You can\'t make a reader like what you have written and you can\'t make them review if they do like your fic. If you threaten your readers with \"I\'m not gonna take the time to post a 30 minute chapter\" unless you get more reviews then you take the risk of losing readers who might have left glowing reviews and possibly end up harshly disliked by what might have been your fans.

You are not doing a service to the readers who in return should review you, you are asking that others read and critique your work so that you might imporve.

Readers are not obligated to review, just as authors do not have the right to punish readers with lack of posts due to lack of reviews.

Thank you for your time,

V.M.