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......Okay, just as a warning this is going to be a MAJOR FLAME! ><; I don\'t flame people often but...I mean come on. Number one: Gohan would SOOOO not talk to Vegeta like that or say any of those mondo retarded things he said to him. Number two: Uhm, hello? o.O; I seriously doubt 1000 times gravity would KILL Vegeta. I mean he had it worked up to five hundred before he fought the androids and he wasn\'t even a super saiyajin at that point. Uhm, DUH. I could point out fifty million other things that are wrong with this thing but...I\'m not going to waste anymore time. -Shakes her head.- Maybe you should come back when you can actually write something where people are at least HALF WAY in character. -.-;;

awww i love this couple.Although it isnt ur everyday pairing.You dont see too much of this couple tho.Update A.S.A.P. b/c i want to see where u go w/ this.:)

Yay! Good methinks. More?

Um ok well well see in a few chaps how i feel um so just update ok.....

I really don\'t like to do this, but I read it, even though it was you. I think you have a feasible plot here, and the chapter isn\'t half bad.

A little skitso from first person POV to flash back, to almost third person story mode, but acceptable.

Yeah, I am being harsh (for me), but apparently, you\'ll thrive no matter what.

Grudgingly,

Macha

what the hell happen to the story??????????????????????????????????????

Alright,Where is the story -frowns-