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for Under the Bridge

by Hitoshirezu69

person Radz
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Credit would be nice.
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story idea as well as lemon. I liked the Tyson angst bit too, but I didn\'t enjoy the actual story. All the grammar and punctionation mistakes made it truely hard to follow. Half the story I barely understood. Three words, GET A BETA. They\'re truely useful.
person Blackrose
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo cute. I love Tyson/Tala pairings. Hope Kai and Ray don\'t get too nasty with Ty. Hope to see this continued. A sequel perhaps? Where they get together? Looking forward to seeing it if you do.

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