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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wouldn\'t believe how much I enjoy these entries. :D Seems like Maes\' got it for Mustang by his reaction to that comment. And are Ed and Mustang a couple or something? I can\'t wait to see who Ed molests next!!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...this is one pairing that I never really contemplated before. Probably \'cause Maes *is* married (and appears quite happily so). Then again, to all intents and purposes, Roy appears \"straight\" in the anime, too, and look at what a hot pairing that makes with Ed. **laughs**
Ed\'s caring nature showed through in the installment, as well as his...er...voracious appetite. **grinz** It was a nice interlude between Ed and Maes, though it seemed that it could have lasted longer if not for the interuption. Ed\'s skills of observation are as strong as ever as evidenced after Roy\'s sudden appearance and then retreat. I wonder what could have happened between Roy and Maes to have caused such obvious unhappiness. My thoughts tend to steer towards Roy\'s seeming fascination with Ed which may have left Maes out in the cold (after all, Roy can be rather ruthless and single minded...and occasionally heartless if the situation arises).
All in all, I\'m finding myself thoroughly enjoying your fic. Looking forward to the next installment!
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Chiruken
Ed\'s caring nature showed through in the installment, as well as his...er...voracious appetite. **grinz** It was a nice interlude between Ed and Maes, though it seemed that it could have lasted longer if not for the interuption. Ed\'s skills of observation are as strong as ever as evidenced after Roy\'s sudden appearance and then retreat. I wonder what could have happened between Roy and Maes to have caused such obvious unhappiness. My thoughts tend to steer towards Roy\'s seeming fascination with Ed which may have left Maes out in the cold (after all, Roy can be rather ruthless and single minded...and occasionally heartless if the situation arises).
All in all, I\'m finding myself thoroughly enjoying your fic. Looking forward to the next installment!
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Chiruken
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started to review this, but then I realized that I hadn\'t read Entry 2 yet. So I read that one, and man---that one was good, too! I like nearly all of the guys on FMA, and I just love how Maes was in this one. I think he\'s sexy too; too bad he was killed in ep. 25(?). Sorry for any spoilers, folks. But for those who saw it, I know I wasn\'t the only one who cried during the funeral scene! And as for Entry 2, that threesome is hot, too. But there\'s one thing I haven\'t seen yet from anyone: a threesome either involving Ed/Winry/Roy,Ed/Winry/Al,(I know it may sound crazy), or better yet, like you had Roy suggest, him, Maes, and Ed, or even good ol\' Envy and those two. Hell, even throw Havoc in there! Now there\'s some twisted potential! :3 Sorry for all the writing, but those thoughts popped into my head while writing this. I hope you\'ll write more soon! --EM
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... man, that was awesome *wipes mouth* :D I would have liked to see a drunk!Ed, though. Update soon!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Wow. That\'s all I can say! The first two were really good and I can\'t wait for the next chapter. This could make for a wonderful story. An Ed/Envy/Winry might be nice too. Well, great job and keep \'em coming! (only semi pun intended)
~Courtney
~Courtney
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... Great job!! I really like it so far!! Update soon!! 10/10
~KD~
~KD~
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked...oh, I know this is an Elric fic, but please let Hawkeye have Mustang! I think he needs to get his ass kicked on the regular (although every once and awhile, Ed can certainly join in on the fun)...
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome! I think this story has quite a bit of comedy, and I absolutely loved the sex scene. People sometimes think I\'m Riza cuz I\'m defensive...but everyone that knows me says that I\'m only like her on the outside...Defensive on the outside...sad, lonely, and kind on the inside...Oh well...GREAT NEW CHAPPIE THOUGH!!
~*~Mourning the death of Jake Sixx 7/23/89-7/20/05.....
~Muffin
~*~Mourning the death of Jake Sixx 7/23/89-7/20/05.....
~Muffin
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if either Roy or Riza will remember anything of this encounter. Even if they don\'t, I suspect that it\'s an experience that Ed won\'t forget any time soon.
Was an enjoyable read and leaves more options open for the future...as well as curious questions. Such as...will there be repeated encounters later, when all parties are sober? **grinz** Still, I think was a nice touch that such closeness could be shared with Riza. I\'ve always believed that under her tough exterior was a gentle and passionate woman.
Anyhoo...looking forward to more.
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Chiruken
Was an enjoyable read and leaves more options open for the future...as well as curious questions. Such as...will there be repeated encounters later, when all parties are sober? **grinz** Still, I think was a nice touch that such closeness could be shared with Riza. I\'ve always believed that under her tough exterior was a gentle and passionate woman.
Anyhoo...looking forward to more.
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Chiruken
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel kinda sorry for Riza...and jealous of her too. Both guys? She gets both of them? Lucky bit...er, person! Seriously though, we all know that Riza is in love with Roy, but she can\'t help but know that Roy & Ed have had this thing. Roy is a bit of a louse here isn\'t he?
I\'m looking forward to more. This is hot!
I\'m looking forward to more. This is hot!