rate_review Reviews

Now, to begin with, let me congratulate you on being such a fantastic author. I loved the plot, and would very much love to read a sequel/epilouge to OAT, if you should ever write it. I will also admit that I love all your stories, as far as you're written to this day's date, in the Beyblade world. I've spent the three last days reading each and every one of them, and I LOVE them, just to have that said. I love your writing style, and really hope you will write more =)

But, as this is a review, I feel I should review the story a bit more. So, even though this is a complete work, I just keep wondering. How will it be to Kai and Takao when they begin their "new" life back in Japan? Will Hiro ever accept Kai? Any mini-Takao or mini-Kai running around anytime? Will possible write more, but right now its waaay past my supposed bedtime :P

Great writing, and I hope you will write more =)

*sighing lighlty i get on my hands and knees, my bangs covering my large eyes i bow before you and place my forhead on the floor* i'm sure...you dont' like me right now, or dont' even remeber who i am. i am here to give you a well over due apology but i never knew how to do it or say it. i was a child and am very sorry for upsetting you to the point of not allowing me to review you any longer. 8sighs and keeps my head bowed*

i have grown and am much more mature then i was back then...i had been nieve and wanted my way all the time. i despritly seek your approval for the fac tthat i lok up to you. seeing that i was not able to tell you of yoru great work any longer put me on a small stage of sadness to teh point of not botehring to even go onto ff.net any longer. my stroies slowly stopped, and my drive to continue went downhill.

i know it is much, but it is also true. reading yoru fics inspire me...they still inspire me. goign to college now in order to majore within english and french, i pray and ask for your forgiveness...i don't know what else to say...i woudl tell you who i am as of now..btu that woudl firghten me as to if you woudl read my apology or not.

thank for reading...

L.T.

Hurray! *applause*
Wonderful conclusion. Hiro is just gonna have to get used to Kai ^-^
I loved it! I gives you a kiss! Mwah! >w< <3

PERFECT ENDING!

I definitely shed some tears. An epic end to an epic story. I loved it, absolutely loved it.

I'll be on the look out for more stories :)

This was great ^^

I don´t think I have more to say...
maybe wonderful...
... or fantastic... ^^°


I just hope that you will write in any time another TyKa Story *smile*

VIVA TYKA

yours
Drake294

WOW!!! I love this story, my jaw nearly dropped when I saw the update and then the part where it said 'last chapter' nearly knocked me to the floor. It was a beautiful ending, Tyson regained his honor, he has his family back and he has Kai - which in my eyes is the most important part!! XD
The bit where Kenny warned Tala was brill, even I was slightly scared of him.
I look forward to reading more of your stories, you're just so good at writing them.
Baroqueangel

WOW...
What a story - and sooo good ^^
It took a while for me to read through all the chapters you wrote (7 hours or so) but now I can certainly say...
I´m impressed!
You wrote your story in a way I could almost see the characters in whatever they were doing in every chapter *blushes at the thought of the lemon parts*

Ahem...

Anyway I hope you continue this story soon and give Kai and Taka their vacation - maybe on the Isle of Fire? Takao has the Fabergé Egg to return to Kais parents. Thuthfully I´m looking forward to this part ^^

yours
Drake294

O-M-G

I've finally caught up.

And I LOVE IT! Fantastic work - can't wait for some more :D Easily one of the best AU TyKa fics around (along with Majesty and Running Scared lol).

Finally, I've finished reading it. Ok, I'll make this brief owing to the fact that it's really late, sorry early, and my eyes are starting to glaze over. Wow, I couldn't stop reading, I was determined to finish it no matter what. I love this story and if this is the end??? I'm glad it was a happy one, Takao and Kai deserved that. It kinda puts mine to shame. Thank you for posting it.
Now it's time to sleep I think.

I knew it!!!!! How sad is this, I actually shouted that when I realised that Kai was one of the UNA guys. It could only be Takao as the theif. Right, that's chapter 1 read, now to read the rest. :)