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for Once A Thief

by Kali

person Kailover
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good update. Poor Tyson. I hope he gets better. Can\'t wait to read more. Keep up the good work and plz update soon
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is Tala going to do to get the shadows off their trail and will Ty be alright? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Niffty24
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Major up in the cool-ness factor!

And in english: That was awsome! I can\'t wait for another chapter, will the suspense never end?
person Blackrose
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!! COOL!! *Glomp.* This is a great story. Really looking forward to the next installment. Poor Ty though. You meanie. Hope he doesn\'t get too bad. Poor guy. Hope to see them a bit understanding soon.
person Hannah
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kami-sama! O.O It was well worth the wait! *reads a couple more times* I love how you portrayed Kenny in this, a stressed out, highly panicky, lawyer....computer...dude o.0 Its hilarious.

Are Kenny and Hilary married now I\'ma wondering? You haven\'t given any hints about that...

And Max and Rei might be dragged into the picture?! *gasp* I CAN HARDLY WAIT! *squeals*

And to be honest I thought Kai would be a little more hostile towards Takao...Guess he is a big ole softy inside there!

Kai - *glares*

Uh......Deep deep inside... -_-

Keep up the good work! *thumbs up* Your stories fill a warmth in my hollowed heart! *shows diagram* XD

PS. Sorry if I sorta stressed you out and badgered you for an update, which I think I\'ve been doing. I felt kinda bad reading the starter note. Update when you\'re ready hun! ^_^
person icestar
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! update. ^____^

lovely, very cute how matyrish takao is *huggles ill taka*
person Niffty24
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is soooo Kewl and suspenseful! I can\'t wait till the next chapter!
person studio
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. well well well. Seems I was right.. you are very clever. Now, I found no mistakes. I wasn\'t really looking but I usually find one or two pop out at me, no matter who the author of the work I am reading is. That\'s a bit sad for Tyson... is he telling the truth? He better be because lol, I can\'t stand too much angst... gets me all emotional, lmao.. Kenny\'s a lawyer? well... Yay! it\'s almost like a full reunion. Is Oliver going to be in Paris? *hint hint* you should really just ignore that last comment... I\'m having a bit of a Majestics phase lately...
person Starwarrior
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I finally got it!... ^_^
Dranzer: Ur slow...
SW: *glares* Anyway! Loved the story! can\'t wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
person MinakoTykaFan
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good chapter!!! i cant wait to read what comes up next!!!! plz update soon!!

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